ADR3-N's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[BossAsBeatle - Tooth Toss OST Conner Grail & James Renna]

Well written -- I would say you need some velocity controls on those strings. The machine gun attack really takes away from the otherwise great writing.

Also, they seem to be burying all the other instruments, especially percussion and bass. But a nice theme nonetheless!

Jumbs responds:

Hey thanks ADR3! If I remember right I made this on the last day of a 72 hour video game jam. of course there’s room for improvement, but when the clock is ticking and theres still one more tune to write you just gotta roll with it. Thanks for the review!

[Bring The Funk]

Great idea, well written, provocative and introspective chords. Moved to hiphop modern for the clear influence there.

There are instruments that sound like they're not just distorted but clipping, and a bit too far out in the mix. You could apply compression to them to eliminate some of that. Some others seem too loud in general, particularly distorted basses.

But overall a nice piece, a departure from the usual material I get to listen to on a daily basis. Nice work!

For mixing headphones, I highly recommend Audio Technica ATH-m40x. They're what I use daily. Take some getting used to, but you will be hearing an honest impression of everything. Good mixing sounds good on them. Bad mixing sounds, well, noticeable, shall we say haha

boza44 responds:

thank you so much for the feedback, ok i agree i definitely cranked this up way too loud, let me see what i can do. i'm mixing on crappy headphones

edit: just added the original non-cranked up version. it sounds much better, you're right. I usually never max it out like that but maybe i got too excited about the track

second edit: yeah I actually use these headphones because , well, i don't like to have my ears covered totally, these ones are pretty mellow even though they're like $15 headphones they just don't really in general have much capacity to blow my ears out. I'll definitely look into the audio-technica though, and i gotta order a few more of these cheap ones since i like them so much :P i'm using NADY audio qh-200 i like em

NOTE and at the same time, if they sound like (#$* on your headphones, then that's all bad and I've got to work on my mix for sure. I'll look into yours too :)

[rubberband pillow]

That's a strange dream indeed. I like how the song builds off of itself. Simple, but it works. I'd like some more interactivity between the layers and a bit tamer percussion -- the hihat sticks out a bit. The snare and kick seem buried by comparison in the other instruments

[Last Hope]

The melodies of this piece shine considerably despite mixing issues with the percussion cutting through, especially the chorus. I think some trimming to cut out a little bit of the build of the latter part of the song and a more dramatic entrance could give it a little more sense of urgency. But overall it sounds pretty nicely developed and like it knows where it's going. Nice work :)

[Adsorption]

The composition on this is quite excellent. My complaint would be that once the orchestral instruments come in, the drums and bass are buried. Save this project, come back, and revisit it.

You could probably benefit from sending a quiet file like this to a mastering engine of some sort, perhaps having someone draw out the percussion and bass for you via another program first. I could actually do that for you, and perhaps reduce some of the reverb that's taking over the piece.

Those arps toward the end are quite masterful though. I'd say on the compositional end, you're far exceeding what software you have. Those short staccato trumpets and bones might do well with a facelift using musescore soundfonts, if you can figure out how to use them.

Can't wait to see what you come up with next :)

[Lost Army (Original)]

I think I've found my new genre. Absolutely filthy. I think I've been going in this direction with my own music, actually, with a bit more videogamey sound.

[Max Pills]

Song is really nicely written and progressed, but it sounds very, very overcompressed, especially regarding that arp in the beginning.

The hard, percussion driven feeling you're going for could probably be best achieved with sidechain and slightly less compression.

For the dnb elements, chippy feel, and verses, I would probably suggest putting this in nerdcore :)

[Vista Sounds - Air]

This mix is a bit sibilant for my taste and has a lot of reverb wash on it, but is nicely written. I'm not sure that it belongs in hiphop, maybe dance, but I won't swap the genre. Occasionally on those rolled bell like key leads, the volume spikes noticeably. Watch out for that. Maybe compression will help there :)

The percussion is a strong point, but it could use much less reverb. Also, the bass seems to be cluttered by other low mid frequencies from what sounds like mostly reverbs or sustains elsewhere in the mix. You could probably afford to saturate it a little and bring it up in the mix, as well as high pass those reverb signals and other instruments up to 250 hz or so.

Composition is very nice. Keep doing what you're doing!

[Tong Kat Ali]

I confess, I absolutely hate the bass instrument used, maybe could use swapping or an elaborate fuzzy fx chain applied to it as it just sounds dry to my ears, but otherwise really like the presentation. It's very aphrodisiac like :P

There has to be something to make those fantasia/pads a little more lively. Maybe a slow LFO with a high/low pass?

[SH - Battery Acid]

Hehehe this beat is absolutely mischievous! Just a few changes on the mix and a few different choices of note -- some areas the instrumental itself either follows a predictable fall in the 808 or clashes slightly with the mariachi sample.

I would take down your arp just slightly in the mix, up the vocal chops or compress them more evenly. I might also apply some sort of LFO so that the arp itself feels more lively, whether it's a wah wah effect, some distortion, just something to give it more breath. You could also cut the release some more, and take down the reverb a bit. It feels very soft and ... unpressurized on top of the beat. I would want more of a screeching tone, take it down some, etc.

Anyway, grats on the front page. Sounding good :)