As much as I adore chip distortion and emulation, I think you are doing your kick a disservice by chip distorting it. The effect 43 seconds is nice with the chip percussion but I think the mix is pretty muddy.
Any synth that is holding long tones should sit underneath the rest of the mix.
1:35 that run is super cool, but the mix is underwhelming. You just have a really cool percussion line existing on top of the same chorus we've already heard.
That said this piece is nicely varied and is not JUST the same thing over and over despite holding onto the same lead line. I appreciate that. You try to keep it interesting.
Nice work. Thanks for coming out to NGUAC!