Utterly wild foray into a style you aren't used to. I quite appreciate the melody and shift in sound design from you!
I will say the drop could be much harder compressed to get more out of those vocals, and perhaps things could be a bit wetter, keeping to that same gated approach. Also, the percussion would sound better treated in a percussion processor such as diablo for width and clip. Toward the end, it sounds like I think it should, but the perc can safely come down to make room for the kick and 808.
808 always can use more clipped, screaming high mid for character. You could also add a brass stab or two here and there for drops.
Also, I would like to hear more cymbals. I felt them distinctly missing throughout.
Otherwise, loved it