ADR3-N's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[mother ~ ten years on]

This song hits like a truck. I have no critique, only that I would like to hear your vocals up about 3 dB or so, so they were not overshadowed by the piano or guitar.

[SSJ3 - RE:Super Saiyan Three]

Ooh, here it is! I found you!

Fantastic job on parsing this arrangement and getting to know a new library. I'm actually listening to this on the toilet and it's uh, interesting to say the least 😂

The only complaint I have is the French horn is a bit too present relative to the rest of the ensemble and the tambourine could be pushed a bit further back. Beyond that, very, very nice!

Shiverwar responds:

I gotta admit, it's still a little foreign to me compared to the EWQL Symphonic Orchestra soundbank, and since I need to contact them to deactivate the license on my old device, I figured the BBC orchestra vst would be a good substitute, and I was not disappointed! Admittedly, as you said, some of the mixing could have been more fine-tuned to get it to sound better, but I'm satisfied with what I put up here, and I'm glad you are too! Maybe I should revisit other tunes with these sounds...

[0i00 - Funny Cat Videos]

Придется написать на английском из-за нехватки времени, но хотела сказать

Your chord progression is good. I may cut off 200 hz on your strings in the beginning

I was surprised by the entrance of percussion early on. I am not sure this exactly fits into Dubstep due to being difficult to hear the bass, but that does not mean it is bad by any means.

The drums are certainly dubstep, but I'm not sure what genre I would put this in. Surely someone knows, and if so, suggest please.

I think your mixing is improving quite a lot! I would only remove a small amount of reverb, bring the hihats and cymbals down slightly, and increase the volume of bass.

Other than that, very nice, atmospheric, and resembles the album cover art. Nice work!

zeroizerozero responds:

Спасибо за отзыв и советы!)

[Run away]

I think if you had another synth besides piano, or perhaps more atmospheric effects such as vinyl, pitch warbling, chorus, etc, this would sound a lot better. As is, I'm not sure it really fits in hip-hop beyond the hi-hats.

The panning of piano is a bit disorienting. You could use more complex instrumentation throughout rather than fitting both melody and harmony into the piano roll.

However, I know there is a market out there for this sort of music. It fits in with the sort of Undertale aesthetic. And I know for a fact you worked hard on it judging by the percussion and key changes.

Keep trying until you nail the type of music you really love, that you never thought possible. I've been doing this for 15 years, and every once in a while I surprise myself. I have no doubt that if you stick with it, you will go even farther :)

con10t responds:

Thanks! I didn’t realize the panning haha.

[fritos freestyle ft. zabujard]

Not bad. Compress and bring up those vocals about 3 to 4 dB and I'll be happy

Sucking your dick like a frito. I don't even know how that's supposed to work, because I bite fritos T_T

ninjamuffin99 responds:

when u got da bbq ones and they so delicious u suckin da flavor off em 🥺

also appreciate da lil feedback, im still learnin the ropes with vocals and mixing stuff like that hehe

[Stream-fi]

Действительно неплохо. Ло-фай. Давайте немножко больше саба, и я кайфую

Mouzik responds:

Спасибо! Саб баса вроде бы достаточно, возможно это всё из-за наушников.

[ROTTEN]

I really enjoy the rhythm on your 808, but it has a knocking click in there somewhere, and the rest of the beat is quiet by comparison. Do you have anything for mastering compression?

Could benefit from short transition noises and the occasional atmospheric crash also. But keep going in this direction. You've got some great ideas.

[baseball bat ft. ninjamuffin99]

You had me at bitch ass little Primrose

The beat is mid but the diss is fucking hilarious. Plus 2 stars for that

[0002]

Nice, dissonant intro. I want more of your sub around 0:20. If I didn't have headphones on I might not hear it. Overall, CLEAN presentation. I want more cymbals on your drops. Nice work!

[Incompatibilities [TRAP]]

Nice beat! I'm a little concerned with the compression overshadowing your transitions and clap on drops. I might take off some of the low end on your keys. I would bring your percussion overall up by about .5 dB. Overall though nice and clean. Not overdone, not crowded, and sounds great :)

Wolfeni responds:

Thank you very much, it means so much to me <3