Bombastic entrance here, little heavy on the hihats for my taste.
Really enjoy the writing. I think your bass is a bit heavy on the sub-sine and could probably be swapped out for a pulse, ramp, or saw. It takes up a lot of space in the mix and I think forces you to compensate by really ramping up that hihat volume. 1:12 sounds better in this regard.
Even so, blazing melodies, hard hitting chord progression.
I would like to hear a more centered mix overall. It's a bit hard to hear the instruments as they are. It seems they are chorused out and spreaded to the max. That's not to say it sounds bad, just a bit as if I'm in a tin can listening.
Your snare could use some distortion/saturation of some kind. I'm lazy and use Diablo by cymatics for this.
The piece is a quite long 4:50. I feel some sections could be cut and end right around 3:20 or so. Still, I enjoy the section repeated at 3:20. Just think some cutting and arranging could be done to ensure the listener doesn't tire after a while. Keep that in mind for future works.
Still, slamming piece. I enjoy it in much the same way as I do other genres like 2000's alternative, and that's saying something. Great work!
Thanks for coming out to NGUAC!