Sounds pretty good. Drums could come up a bit. Loop could be more perfect. Lead could come down just slightly.
Sounds pretty good. Drums could come up a bit. Loop could be more perfect. Lead could come down just slightly.
Enjoyed the song. Mixing is still troubling you. Specifically drums. I would side-chain them still.
Serum synths do sound good, if a little generic, and your transitions are much better. I will say, this is a proper remix and mashup in one. Although I will say people HAVE done this before. It's just quite rare. Look up DJ Earworm, but pat yourself on the back at the same time because you did more than just creatively mix up a bunch of stems.
Once you get mixing and mastering down, you'll be a fine EDM producer. We all start somewhere. :)
Quite amusing, but I have literally no idea what's going on. Is that one of those paper guitar gizmos?
no it based on a super meat boy type game called chris's rage
The raw atmosphere of this piece draws parallels to the piece represented. I have no real critique. Even the lyrics are not superfluous, unlike a lot of other Christian pieces I've seen that just hammer home the obvious. Good work.
I can definitely see the tech-y Megaman vibe. However, your instrumentation and mixing could be a lot better. A smoother lead would do much better. Perc is laying there in the mix. Could use some better compression, a bit heavier bass with more high end presence for definition, etc. Arrangement is fantastic. Your high end is just decapitating the low end.
A very naked, relaxed piece. I can appreciate it. The ambient noises are what makes this shine most. Would have liked slightly more modulation on your lead.
Thank you for that :)
At 1:59, there's a chord that completely sticks out of the entire composition, which could have been cleaned up digitally. Lots of little of stuff like that can quickly add up. Letting the percussion go ultimately was probably the best decision. Good work.
Yup. Sometimes you just gotta let go.
This would be alright if only it weren't distorting so badly that you can hardly tell what's going on. In this state it's hardly listenable.
ohhh thas wird i dont herd the distorcion well nex time
i will tray harder thanks for the fedback *sorry my inglish
This would be fantastic if it were mixed a little more clearly. There seems to be no real melodic direction it wants to go in other than mildly creepy. Sounds as if it's played on a live piano with different patches, which would explain some of the mixing. Just seems to be a lot of layers on top of one another.
Unfortunately this must be disqualified until you are scouted.
ohh:c well thanks for your fedback and i was nice participate :D
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