ADR3-N's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tarja]

Bit watery and some strange shading, but Tarja is Tarja is Tarja. Only complaint, hair is way too light.

[Gyarados]

Good coloration. Could use more smoothness and fine detail. Belly looks a bit distended though.

Pure-Weasel-Art responds:

Thank you! Noted. Hahaha, you aren't the first to say that about this piece regarding the belly. The feedback is appreciated :)

[fear]

Bic pen? Impressive. Nice work, especially the definition and fine detail. It looks like it could have been done in graphite almost. Very pleasing to the eye.

[Still Loading...]

I particularly like your coloration and shadowing. Very nicely done. Clean and trim. :)

[Emo Cyclops]

Not bad at all. I'd love to see our focal point stand out more fron the background, however. She almost blends in, despite efforts to shadow her and highlight areas of difference. While I feel it's nicely done, the linework and particularly highlights are done in a spotty, jerky manner that takes away from the overall presentation. It's just not very clean. The eye almost looks like wet paint, and is hard to differentiate due to muddy highlights. Be more thorough here; don't make your viewer's eyes work harder to focus.

Overall, feels quite rushed, but not so much that I didn't like it. Keep at it.

MarvinAnimation responds:

Thanks for your feedback tho I have uploaded it again and have smoothed out things to be better. but I got a little hate on the side about that. but I hope you enjoy.
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/insaneanimator/emo-cyclops-refinned

[Lola's lolas]

Oh, very nice! Good perspective, posing, coloration, and detail. I would have liked were the eye details, lashes, and hairs sharper. Other than that, fantastic!

[All new All different spiderman logo]

This is alright. The idea is good, but the execution is lacking. I feel the lines are too hard and thin, and the shadows are too soft, giving an impression of unreal-ness. The outlines on the spider would have stood out more against the red were they much darker, and were a small shadow beneat the spider. The red borders against blue are also poorly defined.

Keep it up, though. You'll get there!

Yoenn responds:

thanks I'll work more everyday

[first (again)]

Detail on the shirt is excellent. Hair could use a lot more fine strokes so it doesn't look like a cloth texture. Good work!

minichou responds:

Thanks!

[Dominate.]

Not bad at all. The breast on the left looks a bit too low on the bottom though. The arm on the left should also be slightly longer. Watch proportions!

minichou responds:

Thanks!

[Toram]

Definitely improved from what I last saw of you, however there is a little asymmetry in the eyes and the legs seem one size all the way down. This is why they look too big. The thighs should slope inward to the knee! Watch breast symmetry too. You've got them at the right height but they look like the right is smaller than the left. I don't think you meant for that to happen. Breasts usually also don't point so far opposite each other.

Keep it up!

minichou responds:

Thank you for the constructive reviews ^o^