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This is much improved from the original. Much smoother, however the issue of blending into the background is still present. With how much more cleaned up everything is, I'd say it's a fair trade off. I do like the cleaner dots and overall smoothness. What software is this, and what drawing pad?

Damn do I wish NG had threaded review replies... Regarding your previous response about haters, don't mind them. Keep working on your craft and eventually your fans will outnumber them. The way I see it, lack of negative feedback hurts more than it helps. Leaves no benchmark to improve off of. If someone doesn't hate what you're doing for whatever reason, logical or fallacious, you're not doing it hard enough. :)

Anyway, keep up the good work!

MarvinAnimation responds:

Thanks EDM364 I am glad you have enjoyed the improvements also I understand you wanted to know what I uses here are the things down below.
Intuos 5 and krita But I will say this it's not about the tablet and software it's how you use them. you may not understand what I mean but still thanks and I am having a lot of hate on not just my art but my animation as well but with the tips you have given it'll help out a lot.

Oh I love it. Excellent shading

Bit watery and some strange shading, but Tarja is Tarja is Tarja. Only complaint, hair is way too light.

Good coloration. Could use more smoothness and fine detail. Belly looks a bit distended though.

Pure-Weasel-Art responds:

Thank you! Noted. Hahaha, you aren't the first to say that about this piece regarding the belly. The feedback is appreciated :)

Bic pen? Impressive. Nice work, especially the definition and fine detail. It looks like it could have been done in graphite almost. Very pleasing to the eye.

I particularly like your coloration and shadowing. Very nicely done. Clean and trim. :)

Not bad at all. I'd love to see our focal point stand out more fron the background, however. She almost blends in, despite efforts to shadow her and highlight areas of difference. While I feel it's nicely done, the linework and particularly highlights are done in a spotty, jerky manner that takes away from the overall presentation. It's just not very clean. The eye almost looks like wet paint, and is hard to differentiate due to muddy highlights. Be more thorough here; don't make your viewer's eyes work harder to focus.

Overall, feels quite rushed, but not so much that I didn't like it. Keep at it.

MarvinAnimation responds:

Thanks for your feedback tho I have uploaded it again and have smoothed out things to be better. but I got a little hate on the side about that. but I hope you enjoy.
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/insaneanimator/emo-cyclops-refinned

Oh, very nice! Good perspective, posing, coloration, and detail. I would have liked were the eye details, lashes, and hairs sharper. Other than that, fantastic!

This is alright. The idea is good, but the execution is lacking. I feel the lines are too hard and thin, and the shadows are too soft, giving an impression of unreal-ness. The outlines on the spider would have stood out more against the red were they much darker, and were a small shadow beneat the spider. The red borders against blue are also poorly defined.

Keep it up, though. You'll get there!

Yoenn responds:

thanks I'll work more everyday

Detail on the shirt is excellent. Hair could use a lot more fine strokes so it doesn't look like a cloth texture. Good work!

minichou responds:

Thanks!

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