ADR3-N's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Darth Porg]

I'm not really sure what's going on here, but I think I like it. The webbed feet could probably do with being a little less grey though.

[Ranger]

Noodle anatomy is interesting. Color and contrast is good. Reminds me of looking through a fisheye.

[Ooh Shiny]

Digging the comic book panel look. Upper rope needs more attention to light.

Caustic-Imp responds:

Yeah, I didn’t really know what I was doing with this one. I like how the face turned out but the rest of it could definitely use work!

[Annie]

Good lighting and contrast. However, the distance of that detached arm is ... murky to me. It looks the same size as the other arm and I can't tell if it's closer or farther away.

[Smiles]

Spam, no effort, not entertaining. :/

[Prayer]

Ah, the classic prayer hands. Nice attention to texture and shading. Pinky on one of the hands is a little wonky, and the angle they come together is a bit funny, but I can't complain. I'm seeing a bright future if you ever decide to do commissions.

Kara-Jayne responds:

Ahhh thanks. <3 the picture was semi that way that I went off of in terms of the pinky.

[Hawk girl Collab]

Absolutely brilliant contrast on the mask. Good values across the board. Could use a somewhat smoother deltoid, since we don't naturally have circular shoulders. Nice work!

[Mira Nygus]

Really well done on the camo and the dreads. Cloth could use just a bit more texture, but I think if this were done over in ink, they would pop a little more.

Kara-Jayne responds:

Oh, I just got lazy on the camo lol Was focused on getting the hair/face really well

[Tsubaki Nakatsukasa]

I'll just be here, quietly waiting for you to get hired by some animation company. :P

[Welcome to the World]

You have a good eye for values. I think the only improvement would be finer edges. My art instructor always urged us to try to avoid drawing lines if possible -- or if we did, try to make them imperceptible. Real life doesn't have lines -- just edges, he said. Values pop more, the less visible lines are.

Kara-Jayne responds:

Agreed on the lines. Upon first learning portraits, our instructor also said that a lot of our features aren't solid lines, to only draw a solid line if you see a very distinct edge to it.