ADR3-N's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yogurt and Penelope]

Art style is fine. If it were an actual animation and not still frames I'd have rated higher. Also, your outro took up half the content.

[A Near Dawn - Sam Running Animation]

Character looks fantastic. Actual running animation is very smooth but also really unrealistic and wonky. Arms should come up a little higher and there should be some side to side motion, as well as bobbing

LeonDaydreamer responds:

Thanks EDM364. Well, it's hand-drawn so it's not changing. :)
By bobbing I assume you mean head... I was going to try and mount a talking mouth (when the character is speaking) and eye blinks onto the head, but if that doesn't integrate well then the bobbing is plan B.

[Pants on Fire | Cinnamontoastken & Pewdiepie Animated]

You won me with the noodle arm. Good style. Would have liked if the vomit were more fluid.

[Game Stereotypes: Call of duty Part 2]

Not bad but transitions between animations are way slow, intro is a couple seconds too long, and recording quality, mics, and mixing could be a LOT better. There's a lot of clipping.

[Destined Flames -Chapter 2 Trailer-]

Not a lot going on in this trailer action wise, so it feels like filler, but the style is interesting. Flame letters look pretty cool too. Would be even cooler to see them animated.

[MALHYOGAFH Wishes you Merry Christmas!!!]

As far as production goes, this was okay, but the voices of the cats were unfitting, and the plot was hard to watch. Wasn't really funny to me, and was kind of just... meh. Pointless killing of animals has never been my thing though.

[Get Ready To Ignite (RU)]

Your animation isn't bad, itself. I'd give a much higher score if everything were colored in, and if the lines were more cleanly drawn. Also, make sure you're not using any copyrighted music, or you could have your submission removed. This sounds like a song I remember hearing on internet radio, but I can't place the name. Be careful.

Keep up the good work! You just might have what it takes to make it big if you're consistent. :)

SrTomDub responds:

Thanks! :3 I'll make sure to keep a steady stream of stuff.
Oh and the music was labled [FREE] so i assumed i could use it :0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YrvlVLLabro

Im not very good at coloring stuff (i know this because whenever i color stuff it looks worse than the linework by itself) but ill keep practising that :)

~ TomDub, the dubstep master