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I would have rated higher if the music that was supposed to loop didn't fade, then abruptly come back in. If you're gonna do a speedpaint here, choose some good, non-copyrighted music (preferably from our portal, so we don't have to worry about breaking any licenses), credit it properly, and if your drawing is slow-paced, speed it up until the action starts happening. A poorly edited video with poorly edited music is gonna get a poor score!

Arielf05030 responds:

It was my first time but thanks I guess

Animation itself is okay, if quite slow and a little ... boring? Not much going on. Sound effects are a little bit loud. Choice of music is a bit stale -- overused in videos I've seen on YT, and I'm not sure if it's copyrighted. If it is, that stuff isn't allowed here. It would be a lot better if you had more fitting music actually. The NG audio portal has tons of ambient stuff that might suit your needs, or you could commission an artist.

Not much animation going on here, not even mouth movements, and the faces are a little smushed vertically, which is strange. It's good that the music is royalty free, so this doesn't represent a potential legal threat in terms of copyright, but there's plenty of good producers here to meet your needs. Google, who owns YT, does everything it can to stamp NG into the ground, so it's disheartening when people use music from there, really. Other than that, there wasn't much action going on -- maybe a little humor. Looking forward to something happening next time.

Supahninja responds:

Thanks for the feedback brotha looking forward to getting better.

Art style is fine. If it were an actual animation and not still frames I'd have rated higher. Also, your outro took up half the content.

Character looks fantastic. Actual running animation is very smooth but also really unrealistic and wonky. Arms should come up a little higher and there should be some side to side motion, as well as bobbing

LeonDaydreamer responds:

Thanks EDM364. Well, it's hand-drawn so it's not changing. :)
By bobbing I assume you mean head... I was going to try and mount a talking mouth (when the character is speaking) and eye blinks onto the head, but if that doesn't integrate well then the bobbing is plan B.

You won me with the noodle arm. Good style. Would have liked if the vomit were more fluid.

A couple frames and some (admittedly nice famitracker tunes) does not a movie make.

Not bad but transitions between animations are way slow, intro is a couple seconds too long, and recording quality, mics, and mixing could be a LOT better. There's a lot of clipping.

Not a lot going on in this trailer action wise, so it feels like filler, but the style is interesting. Flame letters look pretty cool too. Would be even cooler to see them animated.

Animation is not much to be spoken for, and mic quality is bad, but as a short episode and critique, it's not too shabby. Just hope it doesn't get removed for copyright issue.

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