Animation is smooth. Idea is okay. No sound really killed it for me. Also, such blocky characters and rough polish lends me to think you didn't try very hard to put out a decent product.
Animation is smooth. Idea is okay. No sound really killed it for me. Also, such blocky characters and rough polish lends me to think you didn't try very hard to put out a decent product.
This was actually my first real animation and it had sound. But I don't know why it didn't upload it sorry.
But still thanks for the advice I'll try harder next time.
This is so creepy, I enjoy it. Art style is unique!
Thanks man :)
Really long for an intro, and a bit low quality, honestly. Lots of points where white edges are visible. It's sprites. How much harder is it to spend a little time erasing the white bits in photoshop or Pixlr (free), or GIMP (also free)? Interesting concept though -- with Power Puff in here and all. Interested to see if you'll make an overarching plot that is actually interesting or just pull battles out of your ass like all the other sprite series' I've seen. Please tell me the former will happen, hopefully without long drawn out text scenes. A short written intro between bits would be fine!
Interested to see what you'll come up with. Your FX were nicely done and frame rate is good. Vegeta was a little seizure-y though.
It's actually my first time in months since I've started and it would improve in the near future.
Not terrible, not great. The audio/picture quality was fine. The quality of material in the animation itself needs to be better and longer. You'd probably get more traction from maybe 2-5 minutes of content, so people actually get the joke, so to speak.
Thanks for the feedback! we're working on making those changes in our next series
The rewind and fast forward sounds were a bit long, not varied, overused, etc. Other than that, little weird.
thank for critique, yah in the next video I'm going to vary that stuff I made this a little while ago as a first animation more than 5 seconds.
Style is good but I kept watching and expecting something to happen. Instead, the animation was filtered and zoomed. If this were a still, it'd be removed by the moderators in a jiffy, since that stuff isn't allowed here. That's what the AP is for. I assume this is basically an ad for your music videos?
Hey EDM364, thank you for your honest opinion. To answer your question, it is indeed an ad for my videos.
Oh my God, Steve, it's really you! I always find your stuff out there but interesting at the same time.
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