ADR3-N's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Labelled Mentally Ill]

Not bad. I feel the vocals could have been redone due to some slip ups toward the end, but a good message. The music was hard panned which I disliked, but it didn't get in the way of my listening experience too much. The animation could have used some work and was messy, but it conveyed the message quite well with what words did not say. Nice work.

[Arc Infinitum 5]

Pretty awesome installment. I'm genuinely saddened to hear there may not be another. I was just getting into it. :(

I do have to say, some of the animation is a bit laggy and choppy -- or just not natural, such as the straightening fingers at some points. This looks like MMD though so I can understand.

Voice actors are also mixed a little strange. Distorts at some points.

However, as a whole, it transcends its parts, and the story overtakes any animation issues. Very nice work, all involved. There isn't a single point where it feels disingenuous, and that's an achievement.

Kel-chan responds:

If I do do another episode, it will be using 2d animation. I'm going to try a test on another series, if it works out well then maybe we can come back to this

[The Brew Crew Halloween]

Pretty cool actually. Would have been better if the flash wasn't just black and white basically.

[The making of "An Arty Party"]

I would have rated higher if the music that was supposed to loop didn't fade, then abruptly come back in. If you're gonna do a speedpaint here, choose some good, non-copyrighted music (preferably from our portal, so we don't have to worry about breaking any licenses), credit it properly, and if your drawing is slow-paced, speed it up until the action starts happening. A poorly edited video with poorly edited music is gonna get a poor score!

Arielf05030 responds:

It was my first time but thanks I guess

[Tea Cup - Enderman Eyes (Minecraft Animation)]

Animation itself is okay, if quite slow and a little ... boring? Not much going on. Sound effects are a little bit loud. Choice of music is a bit stale -- overused in videos I've seen on YT, and I'm not sure if it's copyrighted. If it is, that stuff isn't allowed here. It would be a lot better if you had more fitting music actually. The NG audio portal has tons of ambient stuff that might suit your needs, or you could commission an artist.

[Yogurt and Penelope]

Art style is fine. If it were an actual animation and not still frames I'd have rated higher. Also, your outro took up half the content.

[A Near Dawn - Sam Running Animation]

Character looks fantastic. Actual running animation is very smooth but also really unrealistic and wonky. Arms should come up a little higher and there should be some side to side motion, as well as bobbing

LeonDaydreamer responds:

Thanks EDM364. Well, it's hand-drawn so it's not changing. :)
By bobbing I assume you mean head... I was going to try and mount a talking mouth (when the character is speaking) and eye blinks onto the head, but if that doesn't integrate well then the bobbing is plan B.

[Pants on Fire | Cinnamontoastken & Pewdiepie Animated]

You won me with the noodle arm. Good style. Would have liked if the vomit were more fluid.