Not bad but transitions between animations are way slow, intro is a couple seconds too long, and recording quality, mics, and mixing could be a LOT better. There's a lot of clipping.
Not bad but transitions between animations are way slow, intro is a couple seconds too long, and recording quality, mics, and mixing could be a LOT better. There's a lot of clipping.
Not a lot going on in this trailer action wise, so it feels like filler, but the style is interesting. Flame letters look pretty cool too. Would be even cooler to see them animated.
As far as production goes, this was okay, but the voices of the cats were unfitting, and the plot was hard to watch. Wasn't really funny to me, and was kind of just... meh. Pointless killing of animals has never been my thing though.
Your animation isn't bad, itself. I'd give a much higher score if everything were colored in, and if the lines were more cleanly drawn. Also, make sure you're not using any copyrighted music, or you could have your submission removed. This sounds like a song I remember hearing on internet radio, but I can't place the name. Be careful.
Keep up the good work! You just might have what it takes to make it big if you're consistent. :)
Thanks! :3 I'll make sure to keep a steady stream of stuff.
Oh and the music was labled [FREE] so i assumed i could use it :0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YrvlVLLabro
Im not very good at coloring stuff (i know this because whenever i color stuff it looks worse than the linework by itself) but ill keep practising that :)
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Not bad, especially not for a first! Would've been fantastic if everything was filled in and colored at least a little. Idea was not original, but the execution was. Nicely done
Pretty great! Some of the dialogue was a little corny/disjunct, but the overall idea was executed well. I have a very short attention span, so I'd have preferred if things were sped up just a bit overall between events. That's just a personal preference though. Keep doing what you do!
A little weird, and kinda poorly (really choppily) animated/drawn. Kinda sounds like stories my friends used to tell me in middle school, which were mildly funny, so I can deal. Serves the purpose.
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