As far as production goes, this was okay, but the voices of the cats were unfitting, and the plot was hard to watch. Wasn't really funny to me, and was kind of just... meh. Pointless killing of animals has never been my thing though.
As far as production goes, this was okay, but the voices of the cats were unfitting, and the plot was hard to watch. Wasn't really funny to me, and was kind of just... meh. Pointless killing of animals has never been my thing though.
Not bad but not fantastic. There are a lot of parts where it feels really rushed and gaps, such as where there's supposed to be a still and it jitters. Looks rotoscoped as well. That takes some patience.
Your animation isn't bad, itself. I'd give a much higher score if everything were colored in, and if the lines were more cleanly drawn. Also, make sure you're not using any copyrighted music, or you could have your submission removed. This sounds like a song I remember hearing on internet radio, but I can't place the name. Be careful.
Keep up the good work! You just might have what it takes to make it big if you're consistent. :)
Thanks! :3 I'll make sure to keep a steady stream of stuff.
Oh and the music was labled [FREE] so i assumed i could use it :0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YrvlVLLabro
Im not very good at coloring stuff (i know this because whenever i color stuff it looks worse than the linework by itself) but ill keep practising that :)
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Not bad, especially not for a first! Would've been fantastic if everything was filled in and colored at least a little. Idea was not original, but the execution was. Nicely done
Pretty great! Some of the dialogue was a little corny/disjunct, but the overall idea was executed well. I have a very short attention span, so I'd have preferred if things were sped up just a bit overall between events. That's just a personal preference though. Keep doing what you do!
A little weird, and kinda poorly (really choppily) animated/drawn. Kinda sounds like stories my friends used to tell me in middle school, which were mildly funny, so I can deal. Serves the purpose.
It would be great, if I could understand or there were subtitles. I can tell effort was put into it. I just don't think the audience was considered.
2003? Man, this is better than some of the stuff that comes out today. Of course, I had to drop a giant 5 for music selection. Nightwish has always been a huge favorite.
People saying this is shit must not understand the amount of effort put into making funny lyrics out of... is this Japanese or Korean, or Chinese? Whatever. I don't even remember what flash we had around then. Nice stuff!
Not bad. Some clumsy applications but that's to be expected as a new animator. Keep plugging at it! Higher frame rates are your friend when it comes to smooth frame by frame!
Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate it :D
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