ADR3-N's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[stupor]

Animation is decent. Your scenes are reasonably well drawn for a second animation. Animation is actually pretty smooth, especially for a new animator. You're getting the hang of it. Now you must tackle sound!

[NOEL but maybe J]

Decent for a holiday animation, but the idea and delivery are a little stale. Could spend just a little more time getting that delivery right so you sound less like you know you sound stupid and more like those idiots that don't actually know they're idiots, so it's a little funnier. I like your concept of using images to animate, though. Reminds me of some of the old adult swim cartoons I used to watch.

[Ballz Bongle Biopo]

The music is supremely annoying. The intros are about two times longer than they should be, and the drawing looks like it could have been accomplished in MS paint. Please, use music from NG. Something, anything but this. Also, blend your shadow edges please.

ToonymanStudios responds:

Sorry! about the music I'm currently making new more improve music. I don't really want to use music from newgrounds or anywhere they have very limited uses. plus this way I'm forcing my self to become a better composer, as you can see music just isn't my thing. but!? as an artist i must make it my place.

[Crawler - Short Animated Film]

Holy mother of god, this is creepy. The spider sound effect was odd, and so was most of the animation. Interesting style though.

[Maple Leaves for Eyes]

Thanks for using my tune, and great work. Like the others said, if this were a game, I'd play it. :) Although, I do have to point out, my tune was "168 BPM", not "BMP". Other than that, excellent work!

Cameron-Ohara responds:

O____O!!!!

Lol, Thanks for pointing that out, EDM. I'm changing the credits so they're correct. :)

[No Life Bars]

Pretty basic, to be honest, but I'll give it a pass. It'd be nice if more people used music from NG, however, not from copyrighted artists.

You should try cleaner lines and blending shades more.

ToonymanStudios responds:

This is not about fancy art, this is my very own natural style of Art. In time I will show and demonstrate it In a proper manner. But for now just enjoy.