This sounds interesting, although the mixing could use a little help. The synths are a bit on the loud side, leaving the track top-heavy. Send me a PM if you like. I haven't done a collab in ... a long, long time, haha.
This sounds interesting, although the mixing could use a little help. The synths are a bit on the loud side, leaving the track top-heavy. Send me a PM if you like. I haven't done a collab in ... a long, long time, haha.
Yeah I didn't even pull this from the original source because I no longer have it and at the time that I made the mp3 file I hadn't mixed it. I pretty much just composed it inside the DAW I was using and sent it to my friend for a reference of where I was at lol. Thanks!
Actually, it's not too bad. You said this is an iphone app? Well, I suppose that negates a lot of my mixing considerations. I have no idea about mobile DAWs. You've made quite a catchy little creation here. Although I feel the keychange wasn't necessarily needed or transitioned well.
That's what I thought about the key change. I was going to fix it, but then I kind of forgot about it. XD Anyway, thanks for the feedback!
For a first, you bring a lot of interesting chord progressions to the table. Loop is not perfect, and I feel like it's very much unfinished, but you should definitely keep pursuing what you're doing. You have the makings of a stellar producer if what I'm hearing is all original composition. Just work on your mixing and instrumentation, and the rest will come natural.
thank you ADR3-N, i haven't been posting here mostly because i forgot this website existed... but in other news i have been hard at work perfecting my craft, and on another note, all those chord progressions aren't mine, they are third party ones. i am pretty embarrassed about this work, not only because its not exactly mine, but also because my new work is much better. I'm glad that you commented on this and hope we can keep in touch!
Title is apt. All the clicking, lack of attention to instrumentation, it really leaves a lot to be desired. Also, is nowhere near DnB.
It's supposed to be completely terrible
Some cool ambient creepy sounds, but the loop is done poorly, and you really could have done more overall. Mixing leaves a lot to be desired.
I know it is made poorly. It took me 10 minutes. I just have to take the thing out that ruins the loop.
Absolutely brilliant composition. There were some points I feel the electronic percussion may have been a little superfluous, but it didn't really take away from my enjoyment of the piece. Stunning work.
Thank you so much, stoked you enjoyed it! Appreciate the feedback, I'm looking forward to working on more pieces and really nailing the balance between the piano and percussion. Cheers!
Writing is fine. 808 could be a bit stronger in the mix. Brass has too long of a decay on the reverb and just too much of it in general. It leaves it feeling weaker. Needs to be darker. Snare could use more grit. Flute is so mellow, it just doesn't leave a good taste. I just feel your samples and instrumentation aren't really standing out too much. Work on subtlety and presentation.
I guess we are going to have to agree to disagree, but that's always fine with criticism. I agree that the flute is pretty mellow. I feel the snare is just about where it needs to be. If there's anything I'm particularly picky about, it's the snare. This 808 actually kills the subwoofer in my car. I had to tune it down in FL Studio a little bit. Perhaps that's not a good idea to judge by my sub. I could see car audio being funky versus headphones. Overall, I myself am happy with the turnout of the song. I usually compare my songs to other songs I have made in the past, and all I'm concerned about is improving. Thanks for your review!
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