ADR3-N's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Joystick Junkie]

It's a good song, but it's definitely missing something, and it's quite repetitive. I can compliment your mixing, however. It's just not my cup of tea.

8-bitheroes responds:

Thanks dood

[GreyDay]

Pretty good song. Mixing and panning is where it falls flat, as well as perc and overall leveling. The highs and pads are totally overpowering your atmosphere and drowning out the bass, taking a 4.5 star song down to a 3.5 for me.

Your writing is good, but a lot of your song is buildup, and repeated phrases. You could use a lot more velocity meddling on adjacent notes as well. I see lots of FX and pitch bending, but these should really be afterthoughts once you handle your arrangement. As is, it's a lot of repeated phrases that feel like they go nowhere fast and it feels quite samey. You've got some very imaginative melodies but it takes FOREVER and a day to hear them.

Anyway, minus that, good song, and I enjoyed it. You've got some talent, but remember -- melody comes first. FX comes second. Mixing comes finally.

capsule69 responds:

Thanks so much for such a detailed and critical review.
It's rare that people will give you an honest opinion in fear of hurting feelings along the way.

I feel like I've made progress with my mixes, which is definitely something I've been aware of for sometime.; but I'll look into melody work too.

Cheers

[I Rob People (feat. Sky)]

Hooks were fantastic and varied. Teq, your rhymes were the strongest but delivery and mixing of your lines was weakest (more so volume wise). Beat was overpowering you the most and without lyrics it'd be a bit hard to understand you. I would suggest just a little more compression on your vocals, a couple dB up in the 8-10k range on your lines to make you a bit more crisp -- will say the noise cancellation was so much better, and your recordings are getting there. Always some fine lyricism coming out of you, and I'm never not impressed.

Beat is fire, just needs to come down a little bit. Velocity on the piano could be edited here and there to make it sound more varied and not just SLAM. SLAM. SLAM-SLAM SLAM. You get my point. Rhodes were a nice touch. It does however sound slightly overcompressed.

Sky, your vocal mixing was strong, but rhymes were slightly weaker and at times nonsensical -- after all, they HAVE banned being a bandit, unless you mean Crash Bandicoot. Wait I wasn't supposed to to be talking smack on your track. Aw shoot.

Couldn't resist.

Anyway, with just a bit more precise mixing, this could be some banging olskool shit you'd hear on the radio if you were cool. Right now, it's almost there. 10/10 would listen again tho.

Teqneek responds:

Okay I made one final edit. Cut volume down on the dubs, raised the mains, and made a few minor adjustments here and there. I think it sounds much better now. I got it sounding about as good as I think I can possibly get it to sound at least.

Next solo track I make, I'd love to see what you can do for the vox.

BUT ONNNNNE DAYYY...
ONE DAY, I TELL YOU...
I'm gonna nail it.
NO FLAWS
...Except the song itself will suck

[SMB2 Menu Song Remix]

Responding to review request :)

Much improved mixing from your other projects. Snare could cut a little more through the mix, and that loud lead could come down just a liiittle. Other than that, I really don't have any complaints. Structure is good. Transition is where it was weakest. The notes clashed with the existing song structure. The drop just felt a bit superficial and repetitive, really. Overall however, it was a pretty enjoyable listen. Also, the fade in re-establishing the main drive was noticably louder than the rest of the track. Watch for that. You may even master limit your tracks around a -12dB with the Classic Master Limiter FX in MX7.

Pretty good stuff, just needs some minor hotfixes. Also, where are hats and cymbals?

Finnsfolks responds:

Thanks for the review. Regarding the cymbals and hi-hat, they're there, probably just a bit drowned out though :/ As for transitions, I'm not quite sure of what I can do to improve them. About the "master limiter" thing you were talking about, I WANTED to do that, but I would then in turn not have anything to help transition from the drop back to the verse (which, in this case, was a kick and cymbal).
If you have suggestions for any of these, feel free to let me know.

[Skyrim Nord Follower Sample Lines]

Nord accent isn't the best, but I thoroughly enjoyed it, and it'd be a good experience if actually implemented in game. You actually sound closer to a Redguard.

CarlTheVoiceactor responds:

That's a fair point! I can definitely imagine this being really fitting for that. I may make a few adjustments to the attitude and try the lines in more of that style :3 Thanks for the listen and review!

[Voice Demo - Whispering Evil]

You really need a windscreen for your mic. You can make one with a coat hanger and sock and rig it with clothespins or really anything you can manage, but that popping is killing me. Also, work on your delivery. You sound like a voice actor trying to work in a library -- sneaky but not spooky or evil. Maybe just creepy. Needs more rasp and hiss. Also, try mixing your tracks in Audacity or another DAW for better compression and use of the soundspace. Dry, it sounds weak.

maxmojo responds:

thx for the criticism ;p

just bought a windscreen.. dunno much about sound mixing tho

[my 1st voice sample]

Your voice is fine. Your delivery could use a lot of work. You could do with mixing your clips a little better and possibly getting a better mic. There's some crackling going on as you record. Something like Mixcraft or Audacity FX, compression especially, could really bring out what you have to offer. I find your normal voice pretty okay for narrating. Would just be better scripted so you actually know what you're doing and present that to your audience. A demo reel needs to be concise!

N1ckalu5 responds:

thank you so much for the tips, i'll start working on it right away!

[Server Error]

Interesting, but watch that sub bass. It distorted in the beginning. Also, take a look at your volume levels. That crash/hat is a little too loud. Sort of just sounds like ambient noise looped over here, but it's strangely soothing. I also feel the dialup tone could be a little quieter.

DJLunatic responds:

Thanks for the feedback!
The sub bass at the beginning was not intentional but due to a filter error, but i feel like it adds to the track a little bit.
I do agree with you the crash is a little high

[I'm on fire again !]

I just love this. Fantastic stuff. Very relaxed and mellow. Bass could be somewhat more crisp, but that's all I can really say. This just sounds catchy. Absolute classic.

EdKempeper responds:

Wow ! Thank you very much for this review ! I really enjoy your works, so I appreciate it a lot !
I spent more time on this track than on some of my other songs, but it's far from perfect and I could have work on it again. Thanks again ! ;)