I really like the direction you've been taking with your music as of late, particularly the sounds you selected -- aside from the strings -- I maybe would change those out for something more obviously synthy. You know, like 80s synth brass in the vein of Jump, and then just reverb or delay the crap out of it, so that it sounds washy and far away.
I think you're reaching that mid-point in your composition, where yes, maybe some things are a bit awkward, but you can safely start taking things away from those 8-bar loops, rather than building on them endlessly. You know what I mean, with more complexity often comes lack of direction and ideas of where to go!
I especially like the bass at 2:14. Just such a delicious acidy feel.
Very pleasant surprise to see you front paged!
Happy producing!
PS, the section at 3:50 is lit