I think those 16th notes in the beginning could come down a bit or be rolled off with a low pass -- the pspsps stands overtop your intro pretty loudly.
I really enjoy the development through 1 minute.
Nice and pensive. I think centering your bass to pulse underneath the track would give more dramatic effect.
1:42 sounds great. The track as a whole may benefit from more compression, as contemporary cinematic in this style is typically quite loud. I find myself wanting more volume and spread on your brasses, louder slams on choir and percussion at that final big section.
Nice work! Thanks for coming out to NGUAC!