ADR3-N's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alone]

Not bad. I'm listening on my phone so I don't have much critique for mix.

I can say that the piano and synths you sidechained for chords seem to have too much reverb and are very chunky in the low mid range. I would bring some notes from those chords up an octave, or pare down the octaves so that the other notes of the chords can be heard. They sound very dark and muddy in comparison to the bright and energetic lead.

Other than that your composition is structurally strong, nice and loud, and the lead is clear. I would bring out your kick and snare just a little more to match the volume of the lead and drive the track harder. You've done a great job keeping the rest clean and tight from what I can hear. Great work :)

OVERSCORE responds:

Thank you, I need as much advice on mixing as I can get… can never seem to get it right
EDIT: maybe it sounds different on headphones?

[DOOTCORE]

Yo, this is either drumstep or dnb I'm pretty sure. But 5/5 for memery

[Drummer]

Hard as hell. Love the fusion of phonk and almost synthwave house. Mix is pretty clear as well. Great use of chip speech. Drum programming is solid and stays fresh. I'm a sucker for that olskool sound and you nailed it.

And huge thank you for sharing your sample sources! You might enjoy the freebies I just posted to my user page. Metal Drums that do nicely for synthwave incidentally, a Casio keyboard, and my own Japanese ethnic hiphop and industrial sample pack. You posted up a whole goldmine. Great sources man. Can't wait to check them out. Thank you!

You should try doing demos for people. Good way to get your hands on more samples for free and make money in your own right if you keep it up!

[The Duel]

Ah, back when quality audio was unheard of. The good old days. Not bad

[HYACINTH GIRL]

So much vibrato-y goodness. I would like to hear just a bit more of your harmonies on the sides

[ForTheLeft - Fluxus]

Great arrangement and melodies. Could use some different instruments than piano throughout. Although you do well to use a large range of the instruments, and probably some different cymbals -- I've released a ton of soundfont instruments and samples in my news, for free, for use with sforzando (also free). I think you'd enjoy them based on this composition. I also can't recommend the Junk Guitar sfz library enough for guitars, over any other sfz. It's hard to find but will help you out massively. You can use it with Emissary Amp and any free cab you like.

Also, even just two different synth guitars panned 100% L and R would help bring your guitars to the front and push the song along. As is, it feels like they lay there a little. I'm on my cellphone also so I can't tell if there's a sine bass but don't hear one rn.

PM me if any of this is unclear or poorly explained. I really enjoy your music and think some new sample material would take it to the next level.

[htaM airA]

Not a huge fan of FNF, but this isn't half bad! I'd bring out your drums a little more, the kick and snare specifically. The concept itself of modding the game is cool as hell

[Inktober #31 - The Last]

Thanks for taking this beat for a ride. Watching you grow as a rapper has been a pleasure, especially with the challenges inherent in working with a pre-made beat. Excellent work. Sounds especially nice with some subtle chorus or verb on the vocals. Definitely got the energy this beat was lacking when I released it and that makes me proud 💙

Btw your enunciation is getting nice and clear. Hard work is definitely paying off. I'm jealous of your wide subject range. Implementing clear hooks is coming along really nicely too. Comes across clear on my phone with the adlibs, though making sure they lay exactly together on consonants and cutoffs is important. This is massive growth and I look forward to hearing more.

Sorry if the paragraphs are hard to follow. Swipe texting rn and I'm sick as hell. But you made my day :D

Cyberdevil responds:

Eyy, great to hear, glad the energy was sufficient! Feel I could've gotten it a bit heavier still, but I'm happy. Reasonably amped and ripped on attitude after all.

That's good to hear too. With the first verse in particular I wondered if people need to rely on the lyrics to hear what I'm saying - not sure I'd catch everything myself if I hadn't written it myself, so nice with some outside perspective on that. Yeaah the adlibs can definitely still use some fine-tuning. TY! For the appreciation and the solid feedback and the instrumental too! Inspires the best stuff!

Get well too! Bang this loud enough maybe you can willpower the virus away! ;)

[Moonlighter [NGUAC '22]]

Says its not his best work. Comes out with blazing solo and a good mix.

I think your lead synths could have a bit more space, like a pingpong delay or something to the other channel, maybe more chorus, reverb, or flanging at points, but everything sounds just fine other than that. Some instruments are obviously synths moreso than others. Sensitive handling of velocity will help this a lot. I do notice supporting guitars in the left channel up high occasionally sticking out. More distortion maybe and compression to smooth out the volume jumps?

I want to hear a bit more of the high mid on your snare. Maybe touch up the transients and bring it up a tad.

I think you did just fine with this piece. A fine way to close out judging the final round for me and certainly worthy to be here. Congrats on making it, and being such a great composer that you criticize yourself even on such songs as this as not your best. I like it a lot.

Great work. Thanks for coming out to NGUAC!

Zip-Zap-Official responds:

I don't like calling them synths lol... I've always given my instruments dynamics (vibratos and pitch bends) so that they sound more authentic and good-sounding, but there weren't many opportunities to do that in this one. I was also running out of time, so the dynamics I did make weren't quite polished.
I originally went with a heavily-chorused lead, but it sounded too... wah-wah? Especially with the cabinet I chose. So I did away with it and just making it clean.

Thank you so much though; I'm glad you like this track, but I know there were so many things that I wanted to do better. After all, the worst critic you will ever have is yourself...

[Make it up]

I appreciate the sound design that went into making this track. It sounds at points however that there is almost no center. Maybe removing some reverb here and there, compressing leads harder, etc, would help that. The vocals are also quite thin and sibilant (I recognize the issues with any sort of chip speech here)

Writing wise, it's great, and your lyrics are fantastic. I think this song understands me, haha. Could probably use running through an internet mastering service for loudness and compression. I think it's clean enough to benefit from that.

Wonderful work. I can hear the love that went into hand crafting this piece. The outro was especially great although short. Thanks for coming out to NGUAC!