ADR3-N's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Miracle]

Great vocal mix. I think performance could be more enthusiastic in some sections, a bit more technically wonky technique if that makes sense. Study various singers' techniques.

The lyrics of this are hilarious and onpoint. Being addicted to being online and videogames, you have painted it perfectly, how it affects your life trajectory. You're depressed and will likely never know love. Never allowed to mature! Not all gamers go through this, and you may find a lady who loves you and them, but it's rare for most, especially the basement dwelling stereotypes that made this song so relatable.

The overall mix and master is pretty clear with the exception there is a bit much sub on the bass and I think it could use emphasis on the high mids. Snare could also use to be brought out just a bit, potentially have an under snare or clap at times.

[Common Area]

The mix on this is somewhat inconsistent, but I like the melodic ideas you're presenting here. It's also refreshing to hear an audible sub sine. But I do think that it could have some elements of excitement applied to it such as distortion, saturation. I think the thing that is doing this track the least favors is the obvious synth instruments used. In general, if it's a synth guitar or other noticable synth instrument, replacing it with a synthy SYNTH is almost always the better option for your listener. But aside from that this is really groovy!

[Stuck with me]

I think vocal mix leaves a bit to be desired for the lead -- it's quiet in relation to the rest of the track, and for intelligibility it needs not to be hidden. Given a wetter treatment and bumped up in the mix it would fix any of my other gripes, such as the BG vocals being louder than the lead. Great composition overall!

[X3ll3n - Bring Out the Flame (NGUAC Finals 2023)]

I think remastering this song later is well worth it, as at present the mix is screaming hot to the touch. Look at the waveform

As for your writing, as always it is stellar

You seem to point out other items of critique I would have in your description, so I will leave that here and say I agree with what you have already pointed out. Again, it doesn't all sound bad, the build prior to your final drop was actually clean because it was minimal, so perhaps dialing back compression for other sections and upping select levels may get you the sound you want. EQ wise I think it's just fine.

X3LL3N responds:

I'm glad you like this !

This song is both a huge win and a big disappointment on my book. I think it's more creative and interesting than what I usually make, but the mix is one of the worst I've ever had to deal with and the song really underperformed due to when I posted it.

I'm not sure how I'd be able to mix it better, so
I'll probably ask peeps from the audio pub for help :)

[Aag Ka Gola]

Utterly wild foray into a style you aren't used to. I quite appreciate the melody and shift in sound design from you!

I will say the drop could be much harder compressed to get more out of those vocals, and perhaps things could be a bit wetter, keeping to that same gated approach. Also, the percussion would sound better treated in a percussion processor such as diablo for width and clip. Toward the end, it sounds like I think it should, but the perc can safely come down to make room for the kick and 808.

808 always can use more clipped, screaming high mid for character. You could also add a brass stab or two here and there for drops.

Also, I would like to hear more cymbals. I felt them distinctly missing throughout.

Otherwise, loved it

[Dragonslayer]

I'm not the biggest fan of the effects on the vocals prior to 49. They manage to sound unclear and centered. However, if those extra distortions and frequencies were spread out somewhat in each channel, I think it would work.

The drop is heavily over distorting at the mixer level. This is a bit muddy and not typical of what I am used to hearing from this relatively new genre. I however do really appreciate what sound design elements I hear, and the song overall structure is great.

We are clipping again before the second drop, which I think shouldn't be happening. I think mixing at a quieter volume would help.

Other than these gripes however, the song is well done. The basses and sidechain elements are probably best done.

veryfakeguest responds:

Thank you for the feedback! Unfortunate to hear these issues arising as I don't think they have been a problem for me before. Nevertheless, I'll take note of your comments and watch out in future projects, thanks!

[xX FIND MY CURE Xx]

The mix on this one is not quite clean -- drops are so sub heavy at points when they are most resonant, various frequencies are soft clipping. The vocal performance could use manual de-essing, but the lyrics are pretty poignant. I think at other times there is a shrill s' sound when there are no s' present, on the bridge.

Beyond that, great arrangement, and the writing of the drops is great. If the mix were fixed, I would give damn close to a 10

IrisStar responds:

Thanks so much for the review! It really helps to have some technical criticisms! <3

[SUNSCREECH - rebirth]

This is so out of my knowledgebase in terms of production, I can do nothing except tell you how much effort I can see you put into sound design. At times I disagree with the structure, but you have this cinematic atmosphere I cannot ignore.

[FACUNDO GARDIOL - Summer Fan ( Glitch Hop )]

I don't have a lot of critique to give for this track. Overall, the drops stay fresh throughout, the switchups are entertaining, and beyond a bit of overcompression and extra volume on the sub, it just works!

SPIRALi responds:

Thanks!! :D

[When it’s over (the bright future)]

This track is suffering from a loud clap, loud hats, and lots of reverb. I think the first two are to cut through said reverb. Some low cut would be helpful for those wet signals.

I hear your videogame influences and recognize them. Represent :)

I think I would like to hear a more defined structure in this song, as it sounds like several ideas mashed together, with no cohesive idea of what is verse, drop, bridge, etc. As far as those ideas though, they sound worth keeping around. I wish there wasn't an abrupt cutoff!