Good!
Okay, I'm starting out the song and really liking it. The synth that comes in around 0:30 really clashes with the bass line though. They're also way too loud. It gets better at 1:40 though. I think you should've faded that one out though, to lead in. You're getting better with transitions here. Have you tried your hand at composing your music?
Cool
The bass synth is awesome. The only really terrible thing I find wrong with it is a few note discrepancies and the string synths, which chopped up the flow of the song. The piano and bass part around 2:00-ish was soothing though, and that makes up for it. Some EQ would be nice though. It is pretty static-y, nothing I can't put up with though.
As for throwing the rhythm off, no, it's perfectly fine. I definitely think I like your later songs better though, which is a good thing, since it means you've improved. Good work!
Yeah, those strings were crap, I think they were some of the FL default samples :/
I only use VST plugins for strings and classical instruments, etc...
As for the EQ'ing I had no idea about it 'back then' but I'm trying to get into it now :P
A little messy, but no biggie
Some of the notes felt like they weren't supposed to go together, but after a while of listening to them, it felt right. Good job. :)
Heh, thanks :P
Yeah, some of the bassnotes kinda contradict the main lead :/
This makes me want to dance.
I can't really criticize it much, besides the lack of a real lead melody over anything, but that doesn't really matter. It's cool without it. I wish I was capable of such weird awesomeness, what with my somewhat bland selection of synths and samples.
The synth at 0:41 is pure ear-crack, and by that, I mean it's just awesome.
Yeah, I had absolutely no idea what I was doing with this song, I'd just had a lesson from my friend about how to roughly make a song, then I just went mad making this o-e
That ear crack you're snorting btw, is the Sytrus default plugin, sorta moved on from that though but might use it one more time in another song mabey...
As for your songs, they may not be weird, but they show a lot more work and composure than this thing xD
Familiar indeed
I've heard this lead somewhere before, but I can't recall where. Either way, you made it bad-ass. =D
I'm not sure why people haven't reviewed your stuff!
Yeh, no idea where it's from >_<
Pretty strange . . in a good way
It's a little weird, like you said, but it has a vibe that I like. Your arpeggio-work is pretty nice, and so is the bass. I'm just not quite sure that they mesh too well. The synths at 1:48-ish mesh quite well. 2:10 has this sort of off key creepiness that I like. Weird . . I feel trippy after listening to this.
Yep, creepy is one of the words to describe it :P
I hear what you mean though, trippy...
Good!
It sort of reminds me of a coldplay remix I heard a while back. If you need a vocalist, since I think using acapellas are not allowed anyways, I could look up the song and do some singing for you to chop up any way you like. I've just gotten a nice stage microphone and I'm currently building a shield for it. :)
Ooh, a vocalist? That'd be epic... I might have to enquire about that... :P
Not bad for coming from a demo version, haha
Some more variation would be nice, but other than that, it's a pretty cool song. It's strange though, haha. The door slamming is epic though! Best percussion ever! I laughed until I cried.
Yeah, variation wasn't even in my vocabulary back then :P
Lol, the doorslam solo comes from 'After Lightning' when my friends were teasing me about my crap music, they'd immitate the doorslam sound, so ya know...
Nice!
I'm loving the progressive loop thing you have going on here. The looping is practically seamless. =D
Nice work!
xD Yeah, s'what I was going for :P
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