This is witty as hell. Could be a bit better mixed. Vocals aren't sticking out very well.
This is witty as hell. Could be a bit better mixed. Vocals aren't sticking out very well.
Just fantastic. Positive, energetic, and funny -- three things you rarely find in raps these days.
So strange. So good. It still has a 4/4 feeling, though.
Pretty good. Drop could have stood out a bit more in the mix, and intro synth sounded a bit cheesy. Other than that, not overbearing. You just need to learn to work your perc a little harder. The chants were a little too frequent during the drop. They became monotonous.
You should try out my song "Toxic" I was just going full heavy with this one but Toxic has more elements to it if you are into heavy stuff
Sounded great until the final resolution. The bass movement made what should have been a major chord sound... off. That's my only complaint, though.
Thanks for the review EDM! Just trying to understand exactly which part, do you mean the three chord rotation at the very end? from 1:32 - end?
Sounds like you have an ok mic, but your mixing and vocals are subpar. Try for more resonance, more like howling at the moon, less like talking, if that makes sense. If you tame that pitch center, learn to mix vocals better, bring that instrumental down a bit, etc., you'll get there. Also watch for distortion.
Actually, I'm using my phone.. heheh..
But thanks for the advice.. I'll try to follow them in the cover song.. heheh :D
Sounds like a bunch of loops together. Really could use cleaning on the mix as a whole. Too much reverb, no melody. It just sort of sits there.
That's how Shadow Rewind works. You create a loop and add on. And there's a melody... Not really sure how you didn't pick it up..
And I placed a reverb over the entire track, so yeah it got pretty chaotic. I appreciate the criticism! Thanks!
Quality is not that great. Of course, it's a WIP. You need to bring more strength and emotion to your vocals. This is the weak point of this work, largely the wordy structure and hard to identify rhythmic and syllabic setup. Keep working on it.
I make beats, metal, samples, patches, dnb, original game soundtracks, RVC voice models, and Russian/ English translation covers. Follow for monthly music producer freebies! Рада помочь русскоговорящим. Семплы вложены в ссылках вниз)))
Age 29
делаю хиты 8)
говно
США
Joined on 9/3/06