Nice organ sound, but again, very hard to hear what's going on, and now that I mention it, the pad is much too quiet, and so is that bass. The organ and other instruments blast it out of the water. I appreciate the writing, though.
Nice organ sound, but again, very hard to hear what's going on, and now that I mention it, the pad is much too quiet, and so is that bass. The organ and other instruments blast it out of the water. I appreciate the writing, though.
Yeah, I was going to raise the volume, though in retrospect, I can tell. Anyways thanks for the tips. :)
Very quiet. Kind of hard to hear even at high volume. This would make nice spacy background music. Other than that, it's pretty, but kinda has nowhere to go melodically or musically.
Yeah, I guess I should have made it a bit louder. TBH I think I may have overexagerated the meaning of ambient. Thanks for the review though.
Sound quality is ace. Wish there were a little more melodic and tonal content. Drops are great, but the whole song sounds like drops and risers, and the vocals don't mesh well when transitioning. It sounds a little thrown together in that respect.
Thanks bro i make now a new song it is very dope i hope you enjoy it
Truly undeserving of such a low score. It's not really my kind of music, but I appreciate the modulation and composition itself. The glitching at some points made me question if I were having a computer malfunction. Lyrical prose could use a bit more work, honestly, but it's hard to write about this stuff without sounding trite. Vocals remind me of a relaxed Pendulum. Structure is a bit repetitive slamming that hook home. It kinda sounds samey, so subtracting half a star for that. Not something I would put on repeat, but something I would hesitate to hit the skip on. I have a very short attention span, fyi. ;)
Hey man, thank you so much! The thing is, the song got front paged, so I'm sure a ton of people zero bombed it, much like the other songs that are on there right now too. I did not write the lyrics, I actually found them on Google randomly, haha. The guy said as long as credit was given, I was allowed to use them, but they were far from perfect, so I did my best with them. I definitely see the repetitiveness and I wish I would have structured the second half of the song differently, but honestly, I did get a little lazy with that, hahaha. I just wanted to finish the album and get it out. I loved working on this song though, so I am glad you enjoyed it!
Really screechy, and not a lot of substance. The kick is nice, and that's about it. I also am not really appreciating the lack of a bass. Seems to not really know where it's going, but for a first, it's not too bad.
Really could have gone without the overly long generic transition. Otherwise, not too bad. Am disappointed that the meat of the song is so short. The ending was a little underwhelming, and it might have even functioned better had you structured it as a loop.
Kind of teetering on the edge of really enjoyable, but just shy, and too short. Would appreciate a little more than keys. Give me some percussion!
> 2 years late reply:
Thanks for the feedback. Noted and appreciated!
Listened to this in 2007. Discovered it again while looking for Christian music. Came back to leave a 5. Dig it.
Really sad the High Q version of this is lost thanks to your domain going down. No real critique otherwise, since it's intentionally low quality here.
Catchy, but the drums are absolutely buried. They should be side-chained with that bass. Fix that, and it's fun for everyone.
bebe I made this song 3 years ago x) This song is trash to me
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