Придется написать на английском из-за нехватки времени, но хотела сказать
Your chord progression is good. I may cut off 200 hz on your strings in the beginning
I was surprised by the entrance of percussion early on. I am not sure this exactly fits into Dubstep due to being difficult to hear the bass, but that does not mean it is bad by any means.
The drums are certainly dubstep, but I'm not sure what genre I would put this in. Surely someone knows, and if so, suggest please.
I think your mixing is improving quite a lot! I would only remove a small amount of reverb, bring the hihats and cymbals down slightly, and increase the volume of bass.
Other than that, very nice, atmospheric, and resembles the album cover art. Nice work!