Hey!
Don't have the mental capacity right now to write in Russian, HOWEVER:
very much appreciate the acid elements of the track.
I think leads could come down by 2 dB overall, bringing drums up, and not mix quite as loud. It sounds as if you have a brick wall limiter on the master. Bass also could come up in the mix a bit.
Other than that, very varied and interesting take on a classic song <3
I promise I will come say hi when I am more awake!