Kinda great
You definitely have talent, I can tell from the way it's put together. This is some pretty good stuff, the only thing I don't like is that it seems to loop in the beginning and there isn't much serious bass to it, not to mention there were a few chords that didn't go too well together. Make sure there is a lot of bass, if there isn't it will kill your ratings. The ending is a ittlewierd, it's not you typical finish where you have some drums involved on the final note and all, but that's your choice.
This was really good for a second audio, I hope to see more from you.
Andrea364 :)