Sounds more like a ringtone than a level theme. A bit ear piercing.
Sounds more like a ringtone than a level theme. A bit ear piercing.
Hmm... I'm not sure what's going on here. The chords here seem to be all the same interval transposed. You'll want to check out something called voice leading -- it's a music concept that will help you immensely to get those tight chord progressions.
That said, your bass sounds really good. I just can't really hear anything else but it and the percussion.
Also, why choose a stock piano? Mix things up a little :)
Overall, this track is very quiet. Sounds uncompressed. Although before I would worry about compression, I would learn all you can about mixing the genres you want to make properly. Don't be afraid to copy what other people are doing in that regard. Learn by doing.
I do like what you've done with your lead, though. Interesting and funky melody over an unconventional house arrangement. The lead made your progression work much better than I thought it would.
This is really quiet, but I can hear what sounds like a nice djenty style, if not the occasional nasty fretting here and there.
But definitely invest in a cab sim if this is digital distortion -- it sounds like it. You can also turn down the presence and tone. If you are recording direct line in, you'll also have this problem. You'll want a DI box.
Short piece, but fraught with tension. Wish there were a proper outro. Interesting.
thnx
Genuinely sounds good. Nice, upbeat, concise. Still could use less wet FX but I understand this must be a part of your production by this point in time.
Interesting melody here, but I'm noticing a theme here, overly wet FX on 4-step arps. I do like the diminished chords though!
i'll work on dat moisture ;3
Hmm, I pretty much agree with Paranoid's review, except for one point -- it's not that your drum samples are super loud -- it's that they're boxy in the low mid range and really dry sounding. Maybe a gated reverb on your bongos would fix it?
dude, i really apprieciate your reviews :D
thank you so much for taking the time to help me man! if you ever wanna work on something together lemme know, you seem nice :)
This is actually pretty cool. Bass line coming in though is really over reverbed/chorused. I do really like this idea though.
I'm not really sure what's going on for the most of the track. It sounds like a big room house kick on some really empty techno leads. Instead of having that snare on 4, I would have one measure of 4 kicks, then 3 kicks and a snare. As is this is pretty short and I can't really get a sense of where we're going. Needs a bassline or something to carry it.
Actually some pretty crazy musical ideas going on here, in a way I like... But it's missing a bassline... needs something.
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