This is a really cool concept!
I'd like a different synth at 0:45. Personal preference is that to me it's a little cheesy.
Very interesting speech to text rap. How long did that take to get out?
1:30 section sounds like it may be overcompressed and mixed too loud. I would take down those leads some and let your percussion shine. It's hard to pay attention to them in the mix with those synths up so far. I'm also not a huge fan of the overall tones I'm hearing. The rhythm is good.
Personally 2:17 isn't my cup of tea when that lead comes in. The foley in the background is giving me a weird lump in my throat feeling, until it just suddenly isn't there.
The solo is nice but I would apply more compression to it. The lead pumps up and down a lot volume wise. On higher frequencies it's a bit ear piercing. Well written there.
Next section has a lot of intricate work on the panning and stereolizing. I'd like less of a flange-chorus type effect on that, less reverb overall, and more saturated high mids. Make it crunchy.
Other than that, with some issues with your presentation, I really enjoyed the piece. Probably one of the more interesting I've seen.
Thanks for coming out to NGUAC!