ADR3-N's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Saving Luzidia]

The animation seems to be made in powerpoint and drawn in ms paint. I'm not really able to follow the story completely and it seems incomplete as a whole with not a whole lot of plot. But keep following your dream. What you're doing right now is storyboarding, which is a huge step in the right direction!

TheChaotixShowPaperB responds:

I really apreciate what your saying. and yeah it feels like i've making this animatic or storyboard for both of my original and parody series it basically an universe where there are 7 guardians of the master emerald but diffrente race. my parody series woody chaotix it's suppose to be inspired one of my favorite crash bandicoot game known as crash twinsanity and my favorite youtuber known as smg4. but in the more crazy situation so yeah i do make this with powerpoint and ms paint but maybe in the future will be better.

[Music Visualizer 1]

This looks like seizure porn! :o

It's super trippy, kind of 70's, lo fi. I can't say I'd know anything about how to make it better, myself, not really knowing how to work flash anymore, but it looks like you have a good understanding of what makes these visuals interesting.

visualizer-art responds:

I translate what I know looks good into seizure porn for eyeballz, using very rusty/rudimentary flash skills. Thank you for the review!

[Seven Can't Sleep]

This feels like a setup for a really, really strange porn intro, but in the style of what English sounds like to people who don't speak English.

DrSevenSeizeMD responds:

Best review of the year *hands you a shiny trophy*

[Human Rights by Satan]

This sounds like how to spot an SJW 2.0 :P

Barricados responds:

Fair point.. although the 'S' means something else in this case :P

[Just a normal day]

The animation is fine. I just have no idea what's going on other than Eliza stumbling on ya girl and ... assumedly someone dying for reasons shown offscreen?

CandiToons responds:

thank you for the criticism! Well- the story is, Dan is walking down the street and notices Eliza weirdly staring at her. Dan waves as a greeting but she continues to stare- ^u^ (( and le oof was because i wanted to end it in an o o f )) :3

[potato people georgies birthday party part two]

I ... really didn't enjoy this. Seemed needlessly obscene for no reason. I'm not sure what's happening or why. Audio mixing is at least clear, though, and doesn't have tons of bg noise.

thepotatopeople10 responds:

It’s not for everyone mate don’t worry

[When Luffy plays as Mario]

It's a me, Luffy-o!

In all seriousness, this isn't bad, but it isn't great either. Luffy's leg animations look pretty weird. There were also spelling and grammar mistakes. May have been smoother if you took the time to draw scenes. Ofc it would take longer and you'd need to emulate a style, but it would look consistent.

DarkKingTube responds:

thank you. i would work on it in next videos

[Kirby calls out Mario (Animatic)]

Art style is great, but would be nicer if the movements were smoother.

Evy-Devy responds:

Thanks! I changed the title for those that didn't read the description but this is meant to be more of an animatic than an animation. It would take forever just to make one parody/video otherwise and also demotivate me while making it. And also make the video smaller since I would need to focus frame by frame if it was mostly animation.

[King of the Portal]

Minus half a star because strawberry clock looks kind of like a carrot. Strawberry lock shouldn't look prettier than strawberry clock! :P

MelloYelloClock responds:

yeah u right. thx bud :)