Voice acting is impeccable. Animation is good. Cohesive style. Not sure about the message -- accuracy of the vitamins, but considering they're getting it from a shady icecream mobster, what the hell, right? Great work. :)
Voice acting is impeccable. Animation is good. Cohesive style. Not sure about the message -- accuracy of the vitamins, but considering they're getting it from a shady icecream mobster, what the hell, right? Great work. :)
Oh, all facts are backed up by hours of research. And all that statement means is "It's made up BS."
Good story, but the voice acting is almost indistinguishable from the storytelling, and from other individual characters in places. Try panning the audio a little differently. Other than that, keep at it!
I know theres not much nuance in voices between the characters, but the narration is actually Solace reading his notes
Animation was great. Voice acting was a little sub par. Some more enthusiasm!
Thanks for the feedback! :D
Loving the deadpan humor and style. Great use of sound effects as well. Keep them coming!
Thanks so much!
Wow, even in an unfinished state, I found it pretty fascinating. I love your art style!
thanx man
Woah, definitely not bad for a first. Keep at it! Smaller, cleaner lines would be a plus, but well done.
Thanks man :D! That's mean alot to me. Ill take your advice when creating another animation.
I got a kick out of this. Nice model jiggle physics.
Thanks! I'm lucky to work with a fun rigger. The whole crew I'm working with is pretty awesome and we're just trying to have fun with everything :)
Some of the grammar was very odd. Ex: "Are you bored?" "Yes I'm" Other than that, it was okay.
Yea, It feels like everyone is polite to others, which is isn't actually the thing :p ..
This will surely be focused by the next chapter. :)
Thanks!
Good animation, but I'm not sure if that copyrighted music will fly here. Might wanna try stuff from the audio portal.
uhg.. i thought this wasnt copyrighted...
The script didn't really make sense to me, and some parts of the vocals were so loud that they distorted. Be on the watch for that. Animation wasn't terrible, but it looks almost mouse drawn. Nice work other than that.
Thank you for 3 stars :)
I will make sure not to scream that much in the next part and take some more time to do the animated parts.
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