ADR3-N's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[HARSHER SLASHER]

Absolutely insane design for the killer. That visor is off the chain.

As for the heroine, there are some wonky angles going on with her ankles. I think you could have brought the knees out as she was strutting in the very beginning instead of the ankles.

The barbed wire pool was a bit hard to make out. Maybe try a shinier texture or larger strands -- or less of them with obvious weed eater whips. Interesting thought though. Watching her textures change was interesting. Could possibly have used more blood splattering about.

But the video as a whole has a clear story, nice cinematic cuts, good soundtrack. Great work

ABNOCTO responds:

Yeah, this animation has multiple lack-of-time fuck ups.
The pool was initially supposed to be full of broken glass shards, but I had to drop the idea because it was too much to handle for my potato GPU.
The fashionably sprained ankles are due to choosing the wrong animation for her high-heeled armature, but I kept them anyway because that wonky walk really makes me giggle!

[MOTEL]

Very cinematic feel, and such an interesting, offputting vibe. I hadn't expected such an ending. Rather the other way around

[RED ROOM]

Looks like it should be in a videogame from the 360/PS3 era. Absolutely grotesque. Speaking of, here from that animation. If you ever need music for your productions, feel free to take a look at my catalog and write

ABNOCTO responds:

Thank you!

[Pico Day Special V2]

Lol, don't be so hard on yourself! It's not terrible. I actually really appreciate the music and the thought that went into recreating the original, probably mouse drawn character

SirSandman0 responds:

thanks! yeah... it was mouse drawn.

[Italy Trip]

You have the basics of animation here, an idea, a sense of humor, and spaghetti. Clean up that line work, have some sound effects, and a bit more of a storyline, and I think this would be a cute, entertaining short.

[Ultimate DragonBall: Clashing Worlds - Part 1]

Absolutely amazing improvement through the years on your sprite animations. Excellent work! Sound has improved a lot too. Awesome!

[Saving Luzidia]

The animation seems to be made in powerpoint and drawn in ms paint. I'm not really able to follow the story completely and it seems incomplete as a whole with not a whole lot of plot. But keep following your dream. What you're doing right now is storyboarding, which is a huge step in the right direction!

TheChaotixShowPaperB responds:

I really apreciate what your saying. and yeah it feels like i've making this animatic or storyboard for both of my original and parody series it basically an universe where there are 7 guardians of the master emerald but diffrente race. my parody series woody chaotix it's suppose to be inspired one of my favorite crash bandicoot game known as crash twinsanity and my favorite youtuber known as smg4. but in the more crazy situation so yeah i do make this with powerpoint and ms paint but maybe in the future will be better.

[Corpse Husband Demon Slayer]

The art itself is not bad at all. The quality of animation seems to be 12 frames per second or less. I think you can do much better than that! Simply onion skin between those frames you do have! Other than that it's not bad at all!