Some of the grammar was very odd. Ex: "Are you bored?" "Yes I'm" Other than that, it was okay.
Some of the grammar was very odd. Ex: "Are you bored?" "Yes I'm" Other than that, it was okay.
Yea, It feels like everyone is polite to others, which is isn't actually the thing :p ..
This will surely be focused by the next chapter. :)
Thanks!
It's okay, but a lot of the issues mentioned haven't been addressed since I last saw. Animation now looks like characters are sort of just twitching -- kind of unnatural.
Animation wasn't bad, but it was a little hard to understand the voice acting over the music. Other than that, it was pretty alright.
Good animation, but I'm not sure if that copyrighted music will fly here. Might wanna try stuff from the audio portal.
uhg.. i thought this wasnt copyrighted...
The script didn't really make sense to me, and some parts of the vocals were so loud that they distorted. Be on the watch for that. Animation wasn't terrible, but it looks almost mouse drawn. Nice work other than that.
Thank you for 3 stars :)
I will make sure not to scream that much in the next part and take some more time to do the animated parts.
It was okay, but the voice acting could have been more varied and spread out from left to right a little more. Could have also used some music. Might want to check the audio portal!
Thanks for your suggestions! I'll be sure to use them with my next animation! :)
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