Good story, but the voice acting is almost indistinguishable from the storytelling, and from other individual characters in places. Try panning the audio a little differently. Other than that, keep at it!
Good story, but the voice acting is almost indistinguishable from the storytelling, and from other individual characters in places. Try panning the audio a little differently. Other than that, keep at it!
I know theres not much nuance in voices between the characters, but the narration is actually Solace reading his notes
I like stick fights, but this one could have used some work. Where are the sound effects? Hoping it's just my sound card or flash malfunctioning. Also, where's the music? The Audio Portal has plenty you could use.
Animation was great. Voice acting was a little sub par. Some more enthusiasm!
Thanks for the feedback! :D
Loving the deadpan humor and style. Great use of sound effects as well. Keep them coming!
Thanks so much!
Wow, even in an unfinished state, I found it pretty fascinating. I love your art style!
thanx man
Woah, definitely not bad for a first. Keep at it! Smaller, cleaner lines would be a plus, but well done.
Thanks man :D! That's mean alot to me. Ill take your advice when creating another animation.
I got a kick out of this. Nice model jiggle physics.
Thanks! I'm lucky to work with a fun rigger. The whole crew I'm working with is pretty awesome and we're just trying to have fun with everything :)
Some of the grammar was very odd. Ex: "Are you bored?" "Yes I'm" Other than that, it was okay.
Yea, It feels like everyone is polite to others, which is isn't actually the thing :p ..
This will surely be focused by the next chapter. :)
Thanks!
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