Good for a first
This is good, no, very good, for a first, but Madness is a little over done. It'd be better if you started your own series or something, or parodied something like the Oblongs or Family Guy, those would be real eye-catchers. Good job, but you could have used more sounds and such. Less volume on the explosion would've been nice. Also, he should have ramped into the building, not go in from a flying-barrel roll. It's just an impossible angle. So as you can see, your movie has lots of flaws, but it's still entertaining. You pass my judgement.
3/5