I would vacate the premises, because that's weird. Or just go pee in the stalls because I don't really dig peeing in front of everyone like you do at the urinal.
I would vacate the premises, because that's weird. Or just go pee in the stalls because I don't really dig peeing in front of everyone like you do at the urinal.
Can't understand a word of the text, and the animation is kind of slow and wonky. The idea isn't too bad though.
Added an extra half star because I now understand the text.
Pretty decent as far as YT animations go. Better editing on your voice track would help. Compression and EQ yo. Otherwise, the animation was pretty simplistic and I found the profanity kinda unnecessary.
sweet glad you loved it :D
Passable animation. Voice acting needs a little work. It's not very clear. you might want to edit your clips in something like audacity.
Would've been funnier if the animation weren't so gappy. Looks like it was made in MS paint. Idea is cute though.
Typography was well done, but it's funny you should use Confucius as your example rather than Jesus Christ. Confucian ideals did very little to change the world for the better. Christian ideals, however, actually work.
The rest of the content comes off as a giant ad hominem with no inkling of a solution. In that sense, you're wallowing in the same sad nihilism you indict the rest of the population for sitting with.
You are precisely right! Well, besides the nihilism, because I'm not saying at all that nothing matters or that nothing can be done.
I made those writing choices because, above all, what I'm on about in the film is how much hypocrisy and complacency piss me off, and I attempted to make you just as pissed off by the end.
Otherwise, I didn't feel arrogant enough to inflict any solution on people. But I take the view that if I manage to piss you off, that rage will push you forward toward a solution of your very own.
Impressions were pretty spot on. Nice. Writing is better than the actual show.
Thank you! I was really aiming for something in the first few seasons writing wise.
I give it a 4 out of 10 for the intro alone. Song was cute. Animation could be smoother and a little cleaner, perhaps more stylistic, but nice work. Clearly, you spent a lot of time on this. Well done.
Thank you for taking the time to watch this and share your opinion. It really means a lot.
You might have noticed the animation towards the second half improved to some extent and got a bit cleaner. The first half of the episode I actually animated years ago.
It is still not perfect but the second half of the episode will be more of an indication of quality on future episodes. I agree a stylistic polish would be nice. I always envisioned the series to have a style that is sort of a blend of regular show/Ren and Stimpy if it ever got picked up by a network.
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