I give it a 4 out of 10 for the intro alone. Song was cute. Animation could be smoother and a little cleaner, perhaps more stylistic, but nice work. Clearly, you spent a lot of time on this. Well done.
I give it a 4 out of 10 for the intro alone. Song was cute. Animation could be smoother and a little cleaner, perhaps more stylistic, but nice work. Clearly, you spent a lot of time on this. Well done.
Thank you for taking the time to watch this and share your opinion. It really means a lot.
You might have noticed the animation towards the second half improved to some extent and got a bit cleaner. The first half of the episode I actually animated years ago.
It is still not perfect but the second half of the episode will be more of an indication of quality on future episodes. I agree a stylistic polish would be nice. I always envisioned the series to have a style that is sort of a blend of regular show/Ren and Stimpy if it ever got picked up by a network.
Came because the thumbnail looked like Casey Neistat. Stayed because YT is already starting to pull this crap. They just de-monetize videos they don't like, regardless of whether they actually break the rules, and sometimes outright delete them. If you're the unfortunate few, soon you get you channel deleted. And the most popular channels, as you mentioned, are complete garbage.
Wasn't super funny to me, but seems accurate. Then again I have a dry sense of humor.
Aesthetic, humorous, and proactive. Minus half a star for audio mixing and delivery. Could be just a little cleaner, more compressed, and polished.
Quality of the art is fine. The presentation just ruined it for me though. There's a lot of just sitting there doing nothing, or scrolling around.
Thanks for the feedback. I really don't know how to make videos, so this first attempt at a work in progress thingy wasn't going to be all that great. Would you happen to know of any future solutions to improve quality like video editing or something?
I'm open to suggestions for improving!
Reminds me of old FlashMX stuff from the 2000's. Almost power-pointy. Lot of obscure references here that I'm sure most of your audience will not understand, but I read you loud and clear. Would be better with more SFX and a higher frame rate.
I didn't realize I'd watched this before until I saw my vote. Goes to show my memory is terrible. Enjoyed the whole way through. I can tell you put a lot of thought into this. Also, nice touch with the chicken on the game of doctor. I bet half of kids today don't even know what that is.
So terrible, it's great. Stylistically on point. It actually looks like an anime opening/credit. I enjoyed the flashes of detailed artwork and would like to see more of that, specifically.
I was expecting this to be a clock day submission by the score. Disappointed. Animation is intentionally terrible.
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