Nice!
Needs more growling and screaming. It'd be much better if it had a male singer and more volume on the electric guitar. Louder bass and less volume on the singing and orchestral elements. The orchestra and choir practically block out the guitar all together. It's a good song none the less.
It's pretty epic, even considering the flaws. It sounds like a fusion of opera, classical and metal to me. If it would have been done a bit differently, I'd have given a ten. This is definitely original. \m/