Awesome!
This will definitely be going in my play list. You have some really nice melodies in there and there is sufficient bass to back them up with harmonies. The beginning you picked was perfect. The only things that I can point out that needs work is the strings and the drums. The strings sound a tad fake. Maybe some reverb would help. The drums are too accented and loud for this type of song. I don't reccomend using shakers like that in this type of song. Just go with a closed hi-hat.