Wow. I really love the harmonic minor (Arabian music uses this frequently) line. Excellent work! The looping is near flawless!
Wow. I really love the harmonic minor (Arabian music uses this frequently) line. Excellent work! The looping is near flawless!
Sitting at the beginning, and the piano synth is grating on me. Your chord arrangements could be a little better spaced at first. They're clashing, which is probably not your point. By 1 minute, it's sounding a lot better, but this is a very, veeeery long intro. I'd shorten up that fade in after the silence and go straight into the business, personally.
Your melodies are not bad once the main hook comes in. Percussion is where it suffers. I'd try a harder snare. It's hiding in your mix. Also, as a whole, there could be a lot more play with reverb. Experiment and try to craft an atmosphere -- a soundscape. It should flow.
At around 2:30, your piano comes back in. Definitely try a different synth. This one doesn't have a bad sound, but it's very generic -- the same piano everyone's heard in a thousand other songs. Try to add more personality.
Your arranging and break are written well enough, and those arps sound hand-written as well. Very nice. Overall, needs a bit more bass, a little more variation other than your standard 4 or 8 bars until an added layer comes in, etc. It's catchy, but it's certainly a niche genre of DnB.
Overall, good piece. Don't take my criticism too harshly. It's good, but certainly could use some room to improve. Keep producing!
Nah, man trust me. It's all good. I need these types of reviews, haha. Thanks dude! Appreciated.
Synth guitars never sounded so damn good. You sir have all my respect! If I didn't work regularly with synths, I'd have no idea these were. Your chord structures are addicting, too. Great work!
Sounds pretty great so far, except the drums definitely feel synthesized at points. It could just be my ears fooling me. It's mostly the crashes and kick. Bass also sounds like a synth to me. You mentioned having me go over the synth part and maybe replace it with a string midi or something. I can't quite figure out what chords we're going for though due to the tonal construction of the song itself. Nice work!
both the drums and bass are synthesized, as i mentioned. not much i can do there as i don't have a drum kit or bass guitar. thanks for the review, sent you a message
Pretty nice stuff here. Huge Star Wars fan too, so naturally, I had to favorite.
Naturally :p
Pretty decent little tune, catchy. Bass is out of the key in the third, final chord. Fix that. Also, the instruments don't have much personality. Try playing around with some VSTs and see what you like, rather than slapping on a preset and calling it a day.
Also, volume overall is lacking. You could try a master limiter. Trim that silence on the end, too!
*puts hands up* Ya got me.
Your sub is distorting a bit in the trap half. Other than that, both styles are great for you. I suggest the techno style for "verses" and trap for "choruses" of your songs. This gives a sense of progression and depth. And if you were going to produce hip-hop, it'd be a great start. Great loop here. Very catchy.
Thanks!
I like the arp in the beginning, as well as the slow kick coming in. However, the hats are a little grating at first. The bass takes some getting used to, as I generally listen to punchier synths. Overall, the song is catchy, but I can't identify a particular theme, so it would be difficult to dance to. I could, however, see it as maybe a level theme. Good work!
Very informative comment. Thanks a lot, I really appreciate!
Not a bad song, but definitely not my favorite of your works. It's catchy, but the mix is a little grating.
10/10 for Silence of the Lambs sample. Yes. It'd hit it.
Haha, thank you !!
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