This is pretty dope. Only thing that jarred me was the toms. Too much high end on them I think, or just too loud. Japanese samples are really nice, but they sound like an American is saying them, or a Japanese instructor, lol.
This is pretty dope. Only thing that jarred me was the toms. Too much high end on them I think, or just too loud. Japanese samples are really nice, but they sound like an American is saying them, or a Japanese instructor, lol.
Thanks man! I shouldve looked for some better samples :D
Panning is kind of weird, but otherwise dope. Your bass could have more presence in the mix, too.
Haha I'm only learning how to make trap and I'm still not too comfortable with it
Needs some serious master limiting. The highs are distorting, and so is the bass. Otherwise would have been fire.
Also, the flutey piano synth could probably be swapped out for something else. As is, it's kinda laying there in your mix.
I really can't pick up the trap except the mild 808 and the hi-hats, which are crazy in both genres usually. If you really want a trap sound, you're gonna have to play with more offbeats. As just a pure DnB tune, it's a pretty nice hybrid though.
You might want to try masterlimiting rather than just pure compression on those drums.
It's more meant to be a DnB tune. I haven't seen too much DnB with hats this crazy though.
As to the compression on the drums, if you were thinking of the snares right at the end getting really loud at those high pitches, it was something that I fixed a while ago. I have a better WIP up at https://instaud.io/kRY, so let me know if it worked. Otherwise, I might try limiting the master / the track I have receiving all of the drum sends.
Got some serious mixing problems. Are you master limiting this at all?
Also, it doesn't feel like it goes anywhere. Just the same canned transitions, same cymbals at different pitches, and no really melodic progression. It feels like it stays in the same chord. Just leaves a bad taste in my mouth with all those frequencies bleeding into one another, sorry.
not everyone's gonna like what i pump out, but hey, i'll take what you're saying and use it to benefit my next project, i appreciate you taking the time to write an in depth critique of my music.
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