To begin with, the opening melody isn't super strong, but once the rest comes in, it gets more interesting. I see you've been using more electric guitar, which is pretty interesting. Needs just a little bit more velocity modding.
You'll find it'll help more if you use a sort of power metal chug.
Nice tight EQ on those guitars. Could use a little more low mid for the sound you seem to be going for.
Also sounds like a lot of Nexus keys.
I like your use of choir. Needs a little more panning, a little less reverb, and slightly less volume.
I'm also missing your characteristic slamming bass. I feel like that'd be the final cherry on top.
Other than that, I can't complain. This is overall a pretty solid piece, other than a couple dynamics issues which I understand comes from stitching together very diverse instrumentations and structures.
Very enjoyable overall. Almost to the point I can hardly get my thoughts out before getting distracted by pretty noises. :)