Nice use of SFX -- unsure why it disappeared at 0:22.
Ride cymbal at 0:07 has a strangely dry sound. I find myself wanting a more spacious, tinny hit with a longer release.
0:17, it feels like the energy we were building up prior is lost when that sample just stops. Why not just play with volume, low and high pass, etc., as the rest of the track flows? I'm feeling a little swing in your piano, which still sounds a little tilty even after listening a few times. Just a bit more consistency with the beat here would massively improve your intro.
0:58, I was a bit weirded out that I almost could not hear the snare -- was expecting a punchy PSHHH sound.
1:24, watch out -- your chord structures are starting to get chunky in those low mids. Keep that space open so that the overtones don't clash. Chorus gets catchier and catchier every time I hear it. Think it's going to be stuck in my head. That synth you're using sounds eerily familiar to CS One Bass. If you've never used it, pretty sure it should be available free somewhere. Easy to modulate formant growls with that one.
1:51, it sounds like most everything is panned center here, but the chords are a little more concise.
1:22, volume pumping issue on your transition. Sounds a bit clunky.
"And cut" could probably have done with some compression.
Overall, compelling chord progression. I'd say up until about 1:24, the piece was harried with structure problems, seemingly unsure of where it's going, but this can easily be remedied with some study of voice leading tutorials, song structure, etc. There were still some issues of over-reverb, but not so much that it particularly sounded muddy until bigger sections. I enjoyed the piece. Thanks for coming out to NGUAC!