Short but cool. My only complaint is the drum samples sequenced hide just a bit in the mix. The loop is flawless, and the mix is suitably loud. As for dubstep, it could have a bit more wobbling, but otherwise, I enjoyed the listen!
Short but cool. My only complaint is the drum samples sequenced hide just a bit in the mix. The loop is flawless, and the mix is suitably loud. As for dubstep, it could have a bit more wobbling, but otherwise, I enjoyed the listen!
Thank you. I should say that I intended it to be short for the sake of being looped to follow the original. And I called it dubstep for two reasons: 1) Tempo, and 2) this may get another version soon where I make it a full song. But until then, I'm glad you enjoyed this one. :)
Mixing is fair to good, but I feel the autotune is a bit much. Hi-hats sound cheesy and overly synthy, as well as do the straight beats on bass and guitar. Chords are good. Overall, the song itself is short and not perfect, but I enjoyed the listen.
Thank you!!
There's no one who can give me technical advice, so your advice is very helpful.
Quite amusing, but I have literally no idea what's going on. Is that one of those paper guitar gizmos?
no it based on a super meat boy type game called chris's rage
A very naked, relaxed piece. I can appreciate it. The ambient noises are what makes this shine most. Would have liked slightly more modulation on your lead.
Thank you for that :)
At 1:59, there's a chord that completely sticks out of the entire composition, which could have been cleaned up digitally. Lots of little of stuff like that can quickly add up. Letting the percussion go ultimately was probably the best decision. Good work.
Yup. Sometimes you just gotta let go.
This would be alright if only it weren't distorting so badly that you can hardly tell what's going on. In this state it's hardly listenable.
ohhh thas wird i dont herd the distorcion well nex time
i will tray harder thanks for the fedback *sorry my inglish
This would be fantastic if it were mixed a little more clearly. There seems to be no real melodic direction it wants to go in other than mildly creepy. Sounds as if it's played on a live piano with different patches, which would explain some of the mixing. Just seems to be a lot of layers on top of one another.
Unfortunately this must be disqualified until you are scouted.
ohh:c well thanks for your fedback and i was nice participate :D
A very interesting take on the source material. Now, I feel the bass could certainly use more presence to match the intensity of the lead, which could actually be brought down a little. This reminds me of music from Resonance of Fate -- in the initial town you start out in. Sort of dreamy but down to earth and comfortable. Nice work!
Thank you so much for your response and criticism! RealFaction said the same and after listening again, I 100% agree. I will make those adjustments after the AIM judging is over and replace the file :) Feel a bit frustrated because it was the other way around just before uploading (bass too loud, lead little too soft) and I clearly overcompensated. Thank you again! :) Really appreciate you taking the time to write that.
This does feel like sidescrolling past that mountainous landscape, although I can't say it's something that I would recreationally listen to. Just a very calming piece I would imagine as the credit screen to an aged videogame. I would have appreciated some chippy percussion to drive the piece along. As is, it's sort of lulling me to sleep. That could be the intention, of course. I did dislike the sort of squirrelly lead.
Thanks! That is the style I was going for. Sort of a day night cycle, with the calmer night in the middle. Also, did you dislike the lead because of how it fit with the other instruments or just the instrument itself?
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