Nice work there!
I like the piano work here. The string synths are also pretty well done. I think a different kind of cymbal would be better though. Synth chokes aren't as good. They end up sounding like really static-y hi-hats. Some of the strings sounded fake. I think it was the cello or whatever you used. Maybe a bit of reverb on it would help. This is still very good. I enjoyed it a lot!
Good job!