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Poems

Posted by ADR3-N - June 23rd, 2008


I'm about to make a fucking wall of poems...

Starting with this one I just found in my 4th grade notebook. I made a few minor modifications and added a line or two...

The Men in the White Coats

Here come the men in the white coats.
They're going to take you away to that place.
That place with the white walls.

They're going to take you to the void.
To the unknown.
The place of confusion.

They're going to take you away.
They're going to make you live with the crazies.
They're going to have you pushing up daisies.

They're going to disect you.
Inspect you.
Misdirect you.
INFECT YOU.

They're going to leave you in a little white room.

Foaming at the mouth.
Cloudy Eyes.
They're going to make you DIE.

- - -

Ah, here's another. I found this one in the same note book.

Space

Space.
I need my space...
And if you don't give me it,
You're going to be in deep shit...

If you really are the one caring,
Then stop your stupid staring.

It may be that I'm already crazy like that,
But if you still fail to see my point,
I'll just smash in your face with a baseball bat.

I need my space...
Get away from me,
I'm going to do worse than just use mace on your ass,
Infact, I'll smash in your fucking face or impale you with broken glass,

You think I'm sick,
You think I'm crazy,

Well, I think you need to suck it up and be a man,
I'll shut you up myself when I can.

I'm just your average every day kid,
So put a lid on it,
I'm tired of this shit,
So give me my space,
And stay out of my face.

I know the Truth

I see through your illusion,
Your deception doesn't phase me,
My grip on reality slowly disappears as I'm drifting away in my own bubble of insanity,
You haven't the slightest idea that you still can't control me...

You think that I am your slave,
I beg to differ,
You always find the words to say to me,
I know better,
But something is holding me back,

I cause you confusion,
I watch as you slip away into delusion,
I laugh cause you're seeing hallucinations,

I love that look on your face,

Here's the hole,
Here's the ace,

I know I'm a player, but I be ballin',
And if that's a crime,
We know damn well that I'm guilty,

You think you own me,
But the truth is that I drive you crazy,
The only one who owns anyone here is me.


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Comments

I can't leave this blog without no comments! ;)

A wall of poems you say? That's interesting, and besides, they are really fun to read, only if you have an open mind of what they write.

Mine are usually just disturbing though.

Sounds great!

Yayzorz!

I don't mind disturbing, really to tell you the truth. I'm more into that anyway, sometimes I get into poems about prophecies and other mysterious stuff.

Mine revolve more around insanity, blood, gore, violence, anger, and murder than anything.

You're such a great poet..

Not really

*blush*

See what you did?

Seriously , you are!

Seriously, I suck at poetry

No you don't, I think you're really good at it!

I think I suck at it!

You don't suck at it!!!

Ok, I take your word for it.

Seriously, your poems are very great!

Eh, I dunno. A lot of them are pretty bad.

The poem "Space" sound a little cheesy to me. But it's great effort that you posted it up there though.

Remember not all poems need to rhyme, it just needs a special meaning to it.

I wrote that one a bit earlier than 4th grade, so it sucks

your poems are pretty good, i liked the men in white coats one.

Thanks, that's my favorite as well.

If I knew what they meant, I'd probably criticize you. But seeing as I don't, I'll just leave you alone now

Don't leave me!

1,342

364 = bettur

Duh.

X-Gary-Gigax-X STFU, I do care about her..

Good boy. ^_^

I never understood poetry.

I still don't

Good stuff! I didn't know poems had cursing though o_o

They can, if you want them to

heres a poem about pie, it may be shot but stupid but at least it's about pie.

Pie is King
Pie is God
I own king and god.
I eat king and god.
I shall share my king and god with you,
as long as you share.

Pie for teh win!

364.534223?

364 is teh sexxorz, don't you agree?

I can't write poetry. My thing is prose. But I haven't written anything in a while either.
I phail.

lol

laughing at people is bad :(

I - I wasn't laughing at you... I was... uh... Laughing with you! Yeah... That's it.