ADR3-N's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ballz Bongle Biopo]

The music is supremely annoying. The intros are about two times longer than they should be, and the drawing looks like it could have been accomplished in MS paint. Please, use music from NG. Something, anything but this. Also, blend your shadow edges please.

ToonymanStudios responds:

Sorry! about the music I'm currently making new more improve music. I don't really want to use music from newgrounds or anywhere they have very limited uses. plus this way I'm forcing my self to become a better composer, as you can see music just isn't my thing. but!? as an artist i must make it my place.

[Maple Leaves for Eyes]

Thanks for using my tune, and great work. Like the others said, if this were a game, I'd play it. :) Although, I do have to point out, my tune was "168 BPM", not "BMP". Other than that, excellent work!

Cameron-Ohara responds:

O____O!!!!

Lol, Thanks for pointing that out, EDM. I'm changing the credits so they're correct. :)

[No Life Bars]

Pretty basic, to be honest, but I'll give it a pass. It'd be nice if more people used music from NG, however, not from copyrighted artists.

You should try cleaner lines and blending shades more.

ToonymanStudios responds:

This is not about fancy art, this is my very own natural style of Art. In time I will show and demonstrate it In a proper manner. But for now just enjoy.

[Speedpaint flowergirl can]

It's a good piece, but NG isn't really geared toward speed paints. Try YouTube, or upload your work to the Art Portal. The portal isn't so kind these days.

AngelsDead responds:

Thanks for your compliment! Do you have any tips to improve the speedpaint?

Eventhough most people think NG ain't the right platform to post speedpaint do I get on NG most comments, reactions and even tips. On here I get an average of 3 comments per speedpaint and 0 comment per drawing. While on youtube I get 0 comments per speedpaint and on Deviantart als 0 comments per drawing. After 2 speedpaints I mostly gained 1 follower on NG. I know that its not allot but some people seem to like the speedpaint here...

[Nien]

It was alright, but you spelled your title wrong. It's "Nein", not "Nien". The second would be pronounced like the nine in Jeanine, the "ee" sound in "see", not like the number 9. "Ei" in German is the "eye" sound, not "ie". Other than that, clean up your lines a little bit. Looks sloppy. But it was a good idea overall.

Keep it up!

Scratech responds:

Thanks I misspelled it on purpose just for the lols but the rest was my lazyness and out of sight.

[Stickman Vs Cursor 2]

Animation is okay. Could really use smaller and cleaner lines, though. I feel like this has already been done with Animator vs. Animation.

chrisbasso responds:

Yeah, that will improve i learned a few things on flash tutorials. sorry for the messy lines. :/

[Bounty Hunter Speed Paint]

Don't usually see many speedpaints around here, but this one is alright. Couple criticisms. The skin doesn't really have a lifelike tone to it. No one ever is really that color of yellow. Also, watch your light sources, and detail the hair a bit more. Otherwise, not too bad.

XavierStarr responds:

Thanks, was trying to make her less human and more of another alien race, didn't turn out too well, needed to add more defining characteristics then the yellow translucent skin.

[Dragon Ball Z Super Saiya]

Pretty good illustration and coloration. NG strongly wards against using copyrighted music for videos, though. Maybe use some from the Audio Portal once in a while?

With your skill, you could probably dominate the portal if you focused on animations or flash comics.

Bloodyanimation responds:

thanks yeah i think so to the critic are hard around here since the begining i'm here thanks a lot men

[Batman mines bigger]

Not bad! And decent voice acting. Good use of sound effects. Pretty fluid. Could use some background music, though. There's plenty in the Audio Portal. Why not put it to use?

duffosaur responds:

thanks i'll make sure to add something in the background in the next video

[Eat Your Vitamins, Kids!]

Voice acting is impeccable. Animation is good. Cohesive style. Not sure about the message -- accuracy of the vitamins, but considering they're getting it from a shady icecream mobster, what the hell, right? Great work. :)

Michael-T-Scott responds:

Oh, all facts are backed up by hours of research. And all that statement means is "It's made up BS."