Not 5 seconds in and NUT hahaha. I'm not so hot on the shreddage I hear going on at 15 seconds or so going on. I think lower chords and a bit more varied intonation would give this piece further edge. I also can't really hear if the guitars are double tracked on rhythm or chorused. Drum writing is good though, and I give you an absolute A for effort, as that is a BOLD choice.
1:30 is a nice unexpected drop. I would actually like more center on your bass, a bit less volume on that bass before pushing it (it is losing a bit of the sub due to clipping that hard past the mixer I believe)
And I have that problem myself all the time btw. You can help avoid it with sidechain, cutting out low mid frequencies in your wet signals such as reverb and delay.
The build at 2:55 is sounding pretty good but could use another guitar in the left channel. The chorus or whatever is going on is not doing your writing justice.
also OMG at the very end I was craving another drop, followed by a simple kick/impact and downlifter/fader fx outro.
Overall, fantastic work. Thanks for coming out to NGUAC!