I wish I could better understand this piece, as 9/8 is a very bold time signature and shows you are not afraid to be different. There are however some issues holding this piece back. For one, there are a lot of ideas going on at the same time and they do not really feel congruent to me, and there are some mixing problems, such as the hi hats are very prominent in my ears.
I certainly sense some direction in that the song is not the same all the way through and the melodies likewise swap to different instruments and themes. I feel like what this piece could use is a bit more space, some effects for your synths so they don't sound so dry, and more variation in percussion through sections -- as well as contrast in volume level. Most of all I feel like the last two are contributing to feelings of sameness.
I have no doubt however that in time you will master your ideal style of music though, and I wholeheartedly encourage you to keep going. There are tons of tutorials for the stuff I'm talking about here available on the internet for free, but there is no replacement for originality, which you have! Keep going, and thanks for coming out to NGADM!