This one is really cute. The mix is indeed a bit off as you suggest. Hard to hear the kick. Bass is nicely up. Chords on the side need to come up about .4 dB at least and potentially be double tracked or spread out otherwise in the stereo space. Beyond that you've got such gorgeous writing on the leads I hesitate to score much lower than this. I especially enjoy what sounds to be like meow synth and would like that to be just a bit ... wetter! Otherwise I feel like cutting my critique here. FinaLee has a lot of great points!